Very cool, nice take on what that might have been like.

A great story. Very good.

Aw, so awesome!

Nice, i really liked the shift between the two scene.

Ciao!

this is adorable especially including the young ben and then adult Ben... i love it

That was really good, I liked seeing things from Ben's point of view. Good job!

interesting conept...seems very much like a real event.

This is an excellent piece. I liked the two different chronological settings. Very nice creation.

that was good!

Rachel leaves out that she let Mark in (which she must have done, though one of the irritating things about Friends is that sometimes people get into the apartment building without calling up to be buzzed in), which was her big mistake. Also, they both spent a lot of time persuading themselves that they weren't in love; it took Rachel some effort to realise. Also again, nothing about Bonnie and the beach-house and after fiasco. Never mind - it read well.

That was so cute! I loved the whole thing, but the scene when Ben has the conversation with Ross, when he's five, was my favorite part.