| Reviews for Why we fight |
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   thatsmeglen chapter 1 . 5/9 Ok my previous comment was while I was half way through ur story (just cudnt help it)...I absolutely adore this Fic, many authors write sex scenes but very few are able to bring a shiver down ur spine making u feel what the characters feel, I loved how u described their love and longing for eachother, their coming together was soo sweet and passionate... really I can’t praise u enough! |
| thatsmeglen chapter 1 . 5/9 Damn, this was one of the best smutty oneshot I’ve read |
| AggresiveFangirling chapter 1 . 4/19/2017 ughhh |
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/17/2013 Nice Stroy |
| idol269 chapter 1 . 3/25/2012 Excellent story. I'd list my favorite parts, but I didn't feel like typing the whole story out again :) |
| azerjaban chapter 1 . 12/20/2011 Lol you know when I saw your title I thought this story would be about why they fight In The War... but that was a nice surprise. Though you write steamy scenes better than fighting scenes to be honest. Thnx for the read! Azer |
| ObsessedRHShipper chapter 1 . 5/5/2009 Romantic, hot, and funny at the end! |
| thismipiedoesntexist chapter 1 . 10/19/2008 i loved it. very well written and composed unlike some that i've read that are plain stupid and weird. this was honestly really good. probably one of the best mature ones i've ever read. good job. keep it up. :) |
| trish.brides chapter 1 . 9/4/2008 that was hot! i loved it! |
| wallflower1332 chapter 1 . 6/17/2008 i liked this ;) |
| Muslix chapter 1 . 8/21/2007 beautiful |
| kittyluvr chapter 1 . 5/9/2007 This is very well written. It's a very impressive piece of writing, especially for a oneshot. You did a very good job of introducing the story, characters and situation. You didn't make the story lengthy or wordy but it had the perfect depth of description. It's difficult to write sex scenes because it is so hard to describe the physical act as well as the feelings involved without it sounding like porn and I think you did a good job of avoiding that. I did notice your use of the word "member" however. I am not a big fan of that nickname of the male genitals becuase it is mainly used in a silly way just to get a laugh (if you've seen the movie Mean Girls you might understand what I'm talking about) but I think you got away with it becuase of the way you wrote the rest of the story. All I can really say in the end is well done! Wuv Kitty :) |
| elfwarden chapter 1 . 2/23/2007 Really nice. Wel done elfwarden |
| californiagirl1426 chapter 1 . 12/9/2006 That was hot. I loved how you did all of the detailing. I'm just wondering one thing, was it Ron's first time too? |
| There's Nothing on the Radio chapter 1 . 8/21/2006 That was nice, I'm with Ron though. they shoulda stayed in the kitchen but I loved it. |
