Omg I love this one. I want to hear more. It's so sad yet so hot.

I kno that wo Ai ni means I love you because of fushigi yuugi episode when tamahome leaves miaka, and he writes down wo Ai ni... And it's already been like 3 years since I last shippped tamahome/miaka and it's probably been more than that since I last saw that episode...

Don't ask. My mind automatically stores away useless information and brings it back up at the most useless moments, which is like all the time...-_-

love it! ugh i went through all the trouble trying to google translate the chinese, then notice now you said up at top D

I'm dead. How random and absurdly like them to have a discussion about hickies.

That first sentence had me. It's so WARREN. X3

Chinese and his fists. I think I may need to find a Warren for myself in case of breakup. haha

The domesticity was adorable!

I really liked this chapter. It was a pleasant surprise from the transition from superhero, to personal, then to superhero while incorporating their personal lives. It was a very memorable chapter.

Communication is key to a relationship. I'd like to think Josie or Layla would give him a word or two.

That was too sweet. I really liked how you characterized Warren. It was the right touch of tough guy and I suppose, sensitive soul(?). haha

Haha, omg, Warren saved Will from a swinger couple? That was original. haha

Aw, that is so romantic. I'm completely imagining Warren scaling Will's house to leave a little gift on his doorstep. So. Cute.

Oh my gosh, that ending was adorable!

*complement* If I didn't love your fics I'd hate you for how good you make them.

The way you write and how you described the scenes are just amazing. Your attention to detail and your word choice are unique and work perfectly in this piece.

So, not much constructive critisism but still.

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What did Warren just say?. I liked this