Purly beautiful. The part when Allen leans against the walla nd slides down, i can just see this image so clearly. And just how all the things she needed were ready for her; that he truly knew what she needed.

My god, I love this story. _

*sob* That was so cute! I love Allen...

very nice. i love reading fics like this. i think you did a very good job with describing shion's pain and allen's careing in so few words. thanks for posting this.

This was beautiful. This story made my day X)

Keep writing!

Neat story. Very sad, I almost cried ; The discription was good too. Though I don't understand what the UMN code with the words "Sophie's" on it has to do will Allen. Nice ending anyway. Not many Shion/Allen's are there. ;;