Reviews for Daughter of Darkness
Crazy4Cocopuffs chapter 18 . 6/1/2008
NO! I know how hard it is to get back into stories after you haven't written them for a while but can't you just write one last chapter? Just to finish it off? Maybe a suicide mission that takes down doom and Elektra in a big show down? Something? Anything? Please?
Crazy4Cocopuffs chapter 17 . 6/1/2008
Great chap, as usual. It was so cool that u used my guitar idea. It seems like ages ago but I remember telling u about having Johnny hear E sing with her guitar and u actually did it! I loved the scene! It showed so much emotion.

The E/ Street romance is going good, but I would like to see Alek sneak a kiss or something. Everyone loves a love triangle. And E should totally learn what A's tattoo means. It was s o sweet and poetic.

It's summer now so I hope you get back to this story. Now that I have the time to read it, I need more!
Crazy4Cocopuffs chapter 16 . 6/1/2008
Alek really has it bad, huh? And how did Devon and the others get arrested? Goodness, there are more twists and turns than mapquest in this chap.

I like the throwing knives. What about sais? They're awesome and spinable, good for bored teenagers.
Crazy4Cocopuffs chapter 15 . 6/1/2008
Haha loved the ending! The scene with Reed and E was so sweet. When are they gonna go on a family outing? You know, the fair, maybe a movie or something. Plus, I think they should get a puppy. Imagine a little puppy running thru the house with Johnny's boxers or something!

Love it love it love it!
Crazy4Cocopuffs chapter 14 . 6/1/2008
Hey long time no see! Life has gotten so crazy. I haven't really had time for anything. I had a baby! His name is Aidan and he is so cute!

Anyway, Aidan's finally sleeping the night and I have a little energy left so I decided to check up on my fave story! I'm going thru each chap and everything is so good!

No comments or suggestions for this chap, but I can't wait to get to the next.

See u in the next chap!
Sparkles of Youthfulness chapter 18 . 9/22/2007
Figures I start reading it a month after it's discontinued... -sigh- Well, I do hope you rewrite this story! I'd like to know your new account name, if you've made it yet.

~Lee-chan
white-witch-1991 chapter 18 . 8/29/2007
oi miho you told me you were getting inspiration again hm shame i always used to give you ideas now this *pout* get ur ars on msn NOW

haz
AnGelFrEaK101 chapter 18 . 8/19/2007
hey,

i would love to hear from you. I have had the same problem, but i am on my way of uploading.
darkflame1516 chapter 18 . 8/19/2007
...I have been dreading this day...you can't even imagine...

well, unfortunately it has come...but I'm not as surprised as you might think by it...It had been a long time since you updated and I was beginning to wonder.

But you have inspired me still, even by ending your story...I'm determined NOT to let this happen to Legacy!

From here on out, Legacy is dedicated to this fic, and I will finish it, no matter what.

And thank you for at least posting this note, some authors just bail and you never hear from them again...

And you know darn well that you'd better tell me that new account XD
Only When My Heart Breaks chapter 7 . 6/25/2007
Oh Happy B- Lated Birthday my birthday is Jan. 2 ! So we have very clopse birthdays I know it's very late but it's the thought that counts ! Best wishes in everything you do and I hope you succeed in whatever your heart desires ! Chessy isn't it !

Good Luck

Only When My Heart Breaks
Greysqueen chapter 17 . 4/3/2007
love it but u havnt updated in like 2 months!
Anonymous chapter 17 . 4/3/2007
Sorry for the mega late review but I just read "Daughter of Darkness" today(April l3,2007).Please update soon I want to finish the story so badly.

p.s. I really enjoyed it.
darkflame1516 chapter 17 . 1/10/2007
yay, an update...i likie...i missed this story...

aw...such a sweet kiss...

da** her, love him back already!

OH! Everything Burns by Ben Moody from the F4 Movie! GIMME COOKIES PWEASIE! lol! (funny thing...i knew that from the FIRST line...wow, i'm obssessed! XD)

wait, was she really burning? hm...why didnt they do anything bout that...but still, sad scene...

NO! DONT! GAHH!*continues screaming in long bursts of emotion*

u cant make me wait till SUMMER! thats like 5 months! (oh, and if ur wondering why i havent updated The Legacy yet, veiw the message on my profile...)

YAY! darn, too short a chapter...oh, well...till next time!
nenokas chapter 17 . 1/6/2007
Yay! An update, you just made my day so much better! :D

Thanks ;)

Holy crap.

Elektra and Devon... I think my heart stopped beating when they kissed.. and Devon is such a sweet guy. I wish I could find my own Devon ;)

I just decided that Johnny is the coolest character in this fanfic. I love how he protects Elektra and cares about her the way a big brother should. So kudos to him!

I loved the way you wrote the part about Elektra singing. Her emotions are so real and I'm totally seeing that scene in my head. ;)

And, you know what? I'm going to get the cookies because that song is Ben Moody/Anastacia - Everything Burns. It is on the Fantastic Four original soundtrack!

So, here's my review and where is the cookies?

You have one option, Alex. Give me the cookies and update soon or I won't review any more chapters of this story.

:P
Kibalover chapter 17 . 1/2/2007
WHOO HOO! FINALLY! my work, took you long enough :P

aw, the aw-y-ness! so cute! hehe

very good, you're getting better, need to improve my writing now :P
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