Reviews for Do I Regret My Choice? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story~~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! That was great! No misspellings and it was well written in general. Everybody loves Shanks because of his selfless personality. I mean, he LOST AN ARM for someone! Great work! XxStrawberryKittyxX |
![]() ![]() ![]() ... That was perfect. I absolutely LOVED it. Very well written! The only part that didn't click right was the part about if Luffy had met Zoro then (And beaten him) he would have gained more rep than Shanks. Zoro's a famous bounty, sure, but Shanks is a Yonkou. _' Other than that tiny little thing, it was GREAT! Thank you for righting such a good fanfic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was amazing!wonderful! awesome! you captured shanks perfectly. ever considered a shanks/makino? i bet it'd be good. congrats! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You! *points* Person! YOU ROX MY SOX! That was fun! Out of the Shanks fics I've read, this is got to be high up there on the quality level. So good, it made me literally cry with sadness for Shanks. Usually when I cry at fics, it's because they royally bite. This one doesn't. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice fic. It's not OOC. I glad you wrote it. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly, I adore this story. I adore your portrayal of Shanks, and I adore the hat. |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW! I LOVED IT! especially the ending line...It ROX! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is just beautiful. Shanks' stream-of-consciousness here is really well done, and I love the way his thoughts wander briefly to Buggy, and his wonderings about Usopp and Zoro. And that last line made me smile. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such an awesome story! I luv it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderfully written. So eloquent and smooth. I love the way that it flows so nicely. Grammar excellent. No misspellings. Do you know this is just one of those extremely rare, perfectly done fictions that you come across once in a million years? You're ingenius. Someone like you I would much appreciate reading my fiction and critique on what I need work on. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was really good! And I love how you added the last part! That made that end funny! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! I wasn't going to read this and then I was like. Hell, I will read it! SQUEE! That was so beautiful! Good job! Sweet. *huggles you* |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOOT! IWUVE THIS STORY! THERE AREN'T ENOUGH SHANKS STORIES! AWESOME JOB! So cute! Nice job! |