A quadruple Cinderella story. Very interesting. You have such great talent as a writer.

You have a lot of interesting ideas! Please continue!

I can't belive you only have two reviews! your story is so good! so, basically, this is like a quadruple cinderella story? if so, it rocks! u r so talented. btw, i didn't mean that Aredelis_mercy's reviews aren't important. trust me, getting a review from a talentd writer like ardelis is a VERY big compliment. i just mean I can't believe no one else has noticed this! i'm telling all of my firends about it so that they can review too! go you!

OH this is so interesting! I wonder why Lawrence is so mean. But I liked how they have their own nickname. It's neat. Keep writing! Your story is so good! :D

Oh wow! What a fantastic beginning! You should really continue writing. I love what you have so far. :D Update soon!