To be honest it's not the best plots... You should try not to rush it... Other than that, I look forward to the next chapter, update soon!

This story is mindblowing. when will you update again? im aching to know what happens. keep writing!

Dude, this is awsome! I need chapter 8! It's to good. Will Eragon find ezspiin? Will he kill Galbatorix? I hope so. Thanks for writing this story! :)

Great Story.

Great storie I liked it a lot 10 please update.

I love this story! Please review ASAP

What the hell are you waiting for! (perfect by the way)

The format is a little confusing, but otherwise the story is pretty good...

Man, what a story. It is pulled off in a believeable manner. I like it, though I am not sure I quite understand the whole thing about the 'true Gedwey Ingasia' or the true strength of the rider's. Maybe that will be explained a little bit as the story continues. Though, I may be mistaken, but I get the impression that your story is getting close to finishing. Well, that is all for now. I can't wait for more.

Hmm... this is by far my favorite chapter, I liked how you described Galbatorix and Eragon's battle with him. I just know that once you slow down the pace this is going to be an awesome story! Also, for filler, I think that some Roran,Eragon, and Murtagh family time might be an interesting read, if you like.

I must be cruel only to be kind. I must also stop reciting lines from Hamlet. Okay, you already know I have issues with your pace, spelling and grammar. However, you are improving, I'll give you that. This chapter was definitely an improvement, you are getting better the more you go along.

I'm ba-ack! By now, you are probably dreading my reviews. But onto the constructive (hopefully) criticism. I've got loads of questions to ask you about Selena, but mostly, I found myself wondering why Eragon wasn't very emotional about meeting his mother, whom he never met before. Also concerning her age, did she stop aging when she came to the mountain? Because Murtagh is somewhere around twenty and Eragon in his late teens, so for her to be in her mid-thirties she would have had to given birth to Murtagh in her teens, which is entirely possible, I suppose, but still pretty young.

On the upside, your pace is getting better, I see more description in your writing. Keep up the good work.

1- Spell check all stories and poems. There is no excuse for not doing this. If you do not have a word processor that has the spell checking feature, use a search engine such as to find one.

2- Proofread all entries for grammar and other aspects of writing before submission. 'Hot off the press' content is often riddled with errors. No one is perfect but it is the duty of the writer to perform to the best of his/her ability.

Fanfiction guidlines- apparently they do care about spelling and grammar, seeing as they are the first two rules of the guideline you're supposed to read before uploading a story. But I digress.

You've got very good ideas for the storyline, and it could be very good- except that your rushing. I understand if you are impatient, but too much rushing takes away from the story. Add details, like the scenary and such. This slows down the pace and makes the quality of the story even better.

First of all, everytime a different person speaks, a new paragraph starts. Otherwise, it's all in these humongous paragraphs that can be frustrating for readers. You also had some issues with capitilization, and the pace was too fast for my liking. Also- what happened to Roran? During all of Eldest he was trying to get to Katrina, and it seems out of character for him not to continue pursuing her or at least be frustrated because they were not persuing her. Still, the story is interesting, and I'll read some more.

good chapter, I love it. Update soon!