I'm really liking this fanfic and hope that it hasn't been abandoned and if it has I hope you consider putting it up for adoption of another writer you trust. I really like where this is headed and think that either Gabrielle/Joxer or Ella/Joxer would make a cool pairing for this fic. Whatever you decide I hope to hear something about this fic sometime soon. Keep up the good work.

I like its but are you going to make Joxer and Gabrielle a happy end in this story

Eeeeeehh... What you have written about this story ''If you don't like Joxer''
Who would not like Joxer!
:)

I can feel epic level story telling here. Excellent chapter, this god you have made, she seems bent on remaking the world, perhaps into something that once was, or perhaps to replace Zeus and his kind. keep it up

Interesting. Very interesting. ;D
This story takes so many twists and turns, but I'm really enjying it. :)

Another fantastic chapter! Yes, it's a little confusing (I had to go back and reread a couple chapters) but I think I'm on track with what's going on. Sort of. My brain goes fuzzy when time-travel is involved. LOL, but I love the confusion and the mystery and how it's all unfolding.

The emotion in this chapter is wonderful, very touching. Can't wait to read what happens next!

to change the future you need to go into the need to stop the monster before she is created. stop livia from harming her family. and the monster will up the good work.

Ella's past is so heartbreaking! The way you are using time travel is very intersting - I can't wait for the confusion you're promising! :D

Ah, even more of the mystery is revealed. I love how you give it in bits and pieces. Another great chapter! Can't wait to read what comes next. :D

You're sentence structure needs to be fixed. Otherwise I think I have a grasp of what's going on. The plot is a little complicated but I like it, it moves well and you haven't contradicted yourself so that's always good. I'll take a look at the new chapter tonight.

Zues is really Zeus.

She had been condemned by her Uncle.

Zues.

Zeus not Zues

A god needed no nourishment. But the power of the Ambrosia helped increase one’s powers.

I suggest

A god needed no nourishment, but Ambrosia helped increase one’s powers.

one small suggestion:

The scared man looked at her with scared brown eyes.

this is redundant

The man looked at her with scared brown eyes.

If his eyes are scared it follows that he is.

I haven't been online for a couple days, so I've only just seen the update... and zoomed right over to read the new chapter! I actually squealed out loud when I saw it!

Oh wow, there is no let down on the mystery and suspense here. You continue to weave a fascinating tale, you write with such energy and emotion in this chapter - Fantastic!

And I have to say I really loved Gabrielle's cold rage and Xena not knowing how to handle it - that was a nice touch.

I can't wait to see what happens next! *dances* XD

well, that's interesting, would it have been ole auto himself.