| Reviews for Sleeping Beauty |
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Afima chapter 4 . 6/9 This is what I have been looking for so long. Thank! This was perfectly |
Sa26 chapter 1 . 7/29/2017 Good story Ok this the second story I read on House and Chase finally making peace after the Vogler arc and yours is very interesting. Much more dramatic and taking it slower for them to forgive each other. But why all you guys have to take it to the extremes for them to make amends, can't just be with a simple talk between them ? |
Le Me chapter 4 . 4/28/2015 I really liked this fic, but I'm sorry to say that I was constantly distracted by the consistant textual errors. Whenever you follow dialogue with a 'dialogue tag' (he said; she yelled; the old man replied; etc. etc.) you MUST use a comma inside the punctuation marks, and the dialogue tag MUST start with a lowercase letter - unless it's a name. For instance: "Chase, go do my clinic hours," said House. "Chase, go do my clinic hours!" yelled House. "Chase, go do my clinic hours," House said. If there's no dialogue tag, you use a fullstop/period. For instance: "I think House is wrong." Cuddy couldn't believe the words were coming out of her mouth. I'm aware you wrote this fic 10 years ago, and you may have realised your error by now, but if not, I'd suggest a beta. |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/6/2015 Dis miskien bietjie laat maar, baie goeie storie, was mal daar oor. Sal uitkyk vir jou stories in die toekoms. |
unnombrecualquiera chapter 4 . 3/31/2014 I love the fic |
Tubular Fox chapter 4 . 1/10/2012 This was so incredibly fantastic, I loved every second of it. Thank you for writing it. :) |
ABundleOfDaydreams chapter 4 . 12/4/2011 :) |
Reeka72 chapter 4 . 8/29/2011 Wow. This was so well written! I pretty much sat in front of my computer all day reading this beauty. The story was fantastic and I hope I see more of your work in the future! |
hpenchantress chapter 4 . 8/10/2011 Wow! What a fantastic story! It was truly incredible, detailed, and you could definitely feel what the characters were going through. Great job! |
changsquawkzhang chapter 1 . 3/5/2011 lovelovelove chase! totally in character, it was great! |
Gazlover12 chapter 4 . 2/21/2011 luv it! |
Kermitty chapter 4 . 12/18/2010 Am absolutely in love with the way you write Chase angst. Love, Kermitty |
ForeverRainingFire chapter 4 . 12/4/2010 I really liked your story and I thought you did an excellent job with the characterization. I look forward to reading more from you in the future! |
tryingtobestine chapter 4 . 10/2/2010 I liked it :) |
gaap237 chapter 4 . 2/27/2009 The end was hilarious. Great story. Chase and House's relationship is incredibly complicated. At least they figured everything out. |