Great job. Catch ya on the flip side.

that is so sad

That was really sweet. :) I really enjoyed that, keep writing!

that was goood can't wait for more there is more ain't there?

Great fic! Kinda sad about the siblings, though, and Jamie's living statis.

aw, how sweeet! good job!

Cool, bits of spelling mistakes, but all in all, a great concept, and a beautiful story. _

wow. I like how you have intertwined the Wordsworth poem into this fic. Good job. Very cool. I liked it. :)

Interesting premise, perhaps you might want to rework the poem into the story itself (and spell it correctly!) also, you mispelled several words and the plot seemed very disjointed and shaky. Do you have a betaread? I will beta if you'd like.

This is a great and highly interesting story. Good job,Lauren. I like the song too.