(frowns in confusion)
I don't understand.
How can Christine still be a virgin if she spent the last five years married to Raoul?
They'd have to have consummated the marriage at some point, otherwise it would have been considered invalid and at risk of annulment by the Catholic Church...

This was a very very good story and it was well written, i look forward to reading Global Desires. I will admit the chapter dealing with abortion made me uncomfortable, she could have lost the baby some other way, but i think you made it work. I liked the development of Christine throughout the story. Good job!

(frowns in confusion)
Why was Erik crying?

Christine as a prostitute?just is a kind of girl who would rather be beaten up then does such disgracing a good day.
P/s:this phanfic gave me a great headache

Bravo Bravo! I thoroughly enjoyed your story. You really did a great job and I think you really have a gift for writing dialogue. You had an interesting concept in putting Christine in a harem, really testing the boundaries of her innocense but that's part of what drew me to the story in the first place :) great job!

I'm really getting hooked on your story. :)

Brava. Really, amazing story. But one thing I have to argue over, is the fact that it was a very...brutal story, I'd have to say. It was in no way realistic to the POTC storyline at all, even though it was very well written. No matter how upset Christine Daae would have been, I don't think she would have fled to PERSIA of all places. That's just...outrageous. I do think that it was a good story, well-written, but fanfiction like this needs to be removed from the fan- part. Because, if you were to change names, this could easily be a part of work of your own. But, when you put it with The Phantom of the Opera, it makes no sense. At all. The names are the only things recognizable. Christine becoming a prostitute? It would never happen, ever. Christine is much too innocent, and even though you portrayed that, I do not think she would have gone through with it at all. She probably, I hate to say this, would have thrown a tantrum and left and died in the desert rather than sell herself. Also, abortion. Back in the 1800s, abortion was probably never heard of. If it was, it was usually botched and most women died. So using that was kind of...meh, not a great idea. I will say again, it was extremely well written, and brava on that. Just...please, try to write things semi-realistic if you decide to try again.

that was really well written I was tired when i started it but i couldnt stop reading I absoulutely loved it was very dark at points but still very well done magnific midear

you cannot write

youre an idiot

what have you done to her?

your work makes me sick

I LOVE IT, SO AWESOME, I AM A CHRISTINE ERIK FAN AND JUST LOVE THIS FIC, I LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR NEXT ONE

THE ONLY GOOD PART OF THIS CRAP IS THE EPILOGUE. IM GALD THAT NOBODY ELSE IS READING STROY IS TERRIBLE. I MEAN, YOU ARE A GOOD WRITER,YOU ONLY CHOSE THE WRONG SUBJECT(CHRISTINE, A WHORE? CMON). THIS IS THE GREAT MISTAKE IN THIS AND L ANGE GUARDIEN. TWO MASTERPIECES OF BAD TASTE.

CHRISTINE WILL NEVER BE A PROSTITUTE. YOUR STORY IS WRITTEN, RIDICULOUS, AND TOO SEXUAL IN SOME WAYS. ONE WORD TO DESCRIBE: STUPID.