lovely lovely. There aren't enough Gin/Kira fics out there, I'm glad to see you putting one up.

The thing I loved most about this piece is that I can almost FEEL Kira's confusion, the way Gin is muddling his senses.

Wonderful piece.

Freaky Gin...I don't get how my friend thinks he's the coolest captain...and got me obsessed with GinXKira afterwards. This was very well done, anymore you're planning to write?

I love this very, very much.

It's so tempting to read (or write :-) ) Gin/Kira relationship like this. After all, Gin being a sadist and Kira a masochist is canon, you just have to add a little sex. :-) (Not that theire relation _needs_ sex to be written as totally fucked off, but it's even hotter like this)

But it's not only the concept that I love. I love _this_ fic. OK, I have troubles with the "/", I know it's a stylistic effect but it just doesn't work with me, but there are so good sentences, which make me shudder.

"because there’s nothing else he can expect from Gin but pain mixed in everything." : so true...

"one last wet, open-mouthed kiss goodnight kiss that ensures Kira doesn’t sleep for at least half-an-hour after that" : I love this one too...

The second-to-last paragraph is maybe a little abrupt, I'd like to read more... and the part about the rabbit made me uneasy, because this sort of humour doesn't suit _these_ characters very well, I think...

...

YES. Just YES.

I can't quite believe that I found this story, since I only started really liking this pairing yesterday, and this is EXACTLY how I imagined them being together. The angry, rough, slighty master/servant sex; the condescending relationship; Izuru's almost submissiveness and everything. Just wow. Like I said, this is exactly how I pictured them. Perfect.

It was well-written; smooth words and images that blended to perfection. YES. Characterisation was on point. Ichimaru is just so sexily evil. Mwah.

I love this fic. I really do.

And in conclusion:-

OMG I LOVE YOU LETS GET MARRIED HAVE BABIES AND RULE TEH WORLD.

I liked this, the way it potrayed Kira especially. In my personal opinion it would have been even better if you hadn't made use of all the / slashes, because it was a bit distracting.

Keep up the good work.