The Doctor and River? Probably not, but I thought I would give it a try!

Aww love the fic :):) I think I know who the Jones' are... could it be Jazz and Jynx perhaps ;)

'The mental picture of the little woman running down the street with a pin needle in hand..' Hahaha love that bit - it really made me laugh :P XD

aww!

I really like how you managed to have Jazz all confuzzled about his love life.

And if I'm right... the Jones's... Casey and April? They sure sound like them, and if you follow the new cartoon... April had to make a lot of apple pies to win Casey's mom over soo...

Either way, good story. Kepp up the good work.

Very nice work DesertCat! I couldn't place the Jones at first, but I clicked when I read it again. Great use of them, and are you going to write what happened to Jazz before he hooked up with the Autobots? Your little mention of it just screams for more information

Aw, that was so cute! X3 I liked the touch at the end, reminds me of my grandparents XD

Very cute story, but I haven't an idea who Mr. and Mrs. Jones are supposed to be. o.o

The Jones'? Slash answer may be Ratchet and Wheeljack... or Jazz and Prowl... Non-slash answer is Jazz and Jynx. How's that? :) Lots of PJ references in there, which means Whirlwind is a happy girl this Thursday morning. ;) "-some more than others-", "gorgeous hunk of metal" (and I'm all with her on that one :)), the Jones'. Great little fic.