Sabrina Spellman: (Gasp)
Both: Noooo!

HOLY HELL THIS IS AMAZING

Seriously, this is actually so many things I wanted but never got from the actual show, and you did them so well. Dash finding out, Danny getting a little darker as he's trying to keep everything under control, the ghosts edging in on Danny's personal life instead of compartmentalized in his ghost life. This honestly could have been an actual episode in the show, and it probably would have been my favorite. The way you're writing it, it could have been a game changer, as far as the show's overarching plot goes, and a really good transition into a great next level for the story.
Anyway, sorry to mention this, but I'm also beyond sad this isn't going to be completed. But I also know what it's like to lose interest in a fic, especially when you're a writer who wants to focus on their own work, because I've actually done the exact same thing. Last fanfic I wrote, abandoned halfway through because I just couldn't do it anymore.
Anyway, this was an amazing idea for a story, the plot is great and fun, and I got so many things from it that I didn't expect. So thank you :)

THIS chappy so far is MY #1 FAV CHAPPY IM DYING OF LAUGHTER! The ending was so funny! I love this story! - Great and AWESOME JOB on it!

Im so sad you dont want to finish this its really good! And you got all of the characters down pat. Also i agree with you the "halfa" thing is the worst. But seriously i wish this was longer; great job!

please don't give up on this story! it's really good!

Ohh my gooooddddd

I KEPT SQUEELING WHILE READING THIS BECAUSE IT'S SO SHOW ACCURATE

Oh my god * v *

I love this, I really hope you'll finish it, eventually ; v ;

Oh, and if you didn't know, all we need to get Danny back is Nickelodeon's thumbs up! *v*

Your fight descriptions are top notch

Dude I totally agree. Every time I see "halfa" or "orbs" in fanfic I did a little on the inside. It doesn't kill a story for me, I can still enjoy them overall, but it does irritate me. And dude, everyone is in character and I absolutely love that! U r a great writer

Wow~

I hate this omg you can't just stop it in the middle like wtf man

This story is great! I haven't been interested in Danny Phantom in a very long time, but looking back, I remembered how much I loved the show. These Fan-Fictions are the only things that keep me interested. I understand if you don't finish the story. This chapter wouldn't be the worst place to end it for a while.

OMG why you no update?

More...

UPDATE!

I know it's updated like years ago
but I can't help but review...!
I like this story, especially when Danny got mad hehe,

please update!