I LOVE THE CHARACTER BIOS! It offers insight into their personalities and life! Mau’indi is the only other author I’ve come across so far that has details about the characters and the world they inhabit! I wish more authors did that! ( even the authors for the official franchise!) THANK YOU FOR TAKING THE TIME TO WRITE THESE BIOS! IT IS GREATLY APPRECIATED! :):):):):):)!

Wow, just wow ! ‘Hunter 2’ is AMAZING! Little Fighter got a prosthetic eye that lets her see in Yautja vision! (I have my Yautja see in the same spectrum as humans, but heat vision is cool also!:):) ). Little Fighter managed to drag herself and her trophy back to the ship?! THAT IS FRIKKIN AMAZING! Jet’rikna finally called Little Fighter by her name!:):)! Garv is so sweet!:):). Holding Little Fighter’s hand tenderly (how often is that depicted in the franchise ?) Telling Little Fighter that her scars are beautiful! And willing to risk getting caught by Jet’rikna to visit Little Fighter in the med-bay ! Awwww! So sad that Little Fighter lost almost all of the weapons that Hunter gave her! I’m happy that Ranata views Little Fighter as a Predator at heart! As always, Fire Blood adds the humor! He really doesn’t give up trying to convince Little Fighter to mate with him! I really like that Garv is so kind that he’ll carry her home! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE YOUR STORIES! YOUR CHARACTERS ARE PORTRAYED SO REALISTICALLY THAT YOU CAN IMAGINE THAT THEY ARE ACTUALLY OUT THERE IN THE UNIVERSE SOMEWHERE! THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU TIMES INFINITY FOR SHARING YOUR STORIES WITH THE WORLD!

Little Fighter definitely lives up to her name! She is also very resourceful; using the smart disk and one of her daggers to climb out of the hive; Using the net gun to subdue the predalien ; Then after it escaped and she engaged it again, threw the smart disk to injure it , used her dagger to pin it’s wrist to branch and got the net’s drills to attach to the tree, then jump up to the branch above her and leap onto its head! Unfortunately, Little Fighter was injured by its blood.:(:(:(

So happy she escaped the hive and made use of Schr’all’s weapons and neutralizing agent ! Schr’all got what she deserved! The predalien ( or as I call it the kain’ja amedha ). will make Little Fighter the perfect trophy to prove her worth to the Clan !

That was a BRILLIANT idea to have Little Fighter use the xenomorph secretions to disguise herself! Too bad it didn’t fool that Warrior drone! Hope Little Fighter doesn’t become a xenomorph host!

Hope Little Fighter finds her warrior drone skull! That wouldn’t be fair to go through what she went through , just to lose her trophy! I am not familiar with the Aliens franchise, but whether you created the concept of facehuggers fighting over a host, or it came from the franchise, the use of the concept is BRILLIANT!

What a sad turn of events.:( At least one of her tormentors got killed though! Wonder what will happen to her now that she is separated from the others and unconscious?

OOPS! I MEANT GARV’S DAUGHTER! SORRY! ( how embarrassing! How do you make an embarrassed face emoticon?). Damn, Fire Blood REALLY does have a raging libido! He practically goes nuts just because Jet’rikna is leaving for a short time! ( c’mon Fire Blood, you have six more at home! lol!). Wow ; The hunt is beginning! Hope that Schr’all gets killed! She is nothing but trouble!

I guess “probably will die” is as much of a compliment that Jet’ is willing to give. Fire Blood’s daughter and one of the other dishonorable females going on the same hunting trip is going to spell someone’s doom ; Hopefully theirs!

What a shocker; Fire Blood came to the door naked! That was HILARIOUS! I can’t get enough of Fire Blood’s humor! “You don’t have a blade big enough to cut this!” :):):). _ ! Also good for Fire Blood, figuring out Garv’s plan ! Proved that he doesn’t only “have my brains in my loincloth.” So much for Garv’s plan to overwhelm Little Fighter with training! It just made her even more determined to prove them wrong! Jet’rikna and Fire Blood are harsh but it is necessary.

Ha! Fire Blood at a loss for words! Didn’t think I would ever see that! Poor Garv! Didn’t realize that his actions made Little Fighter think he hated her, when he was just worried about her . He definitely needs to learn that showing his emotions doesn’t mean he is weak. I’m happy you had him stop when Little Fighter told him that he was being too rough! He is honorable; Willing to train her even though he thinks that she will die! Hope he doesn’t decide to beat the crap out of Fire Blood because he got her an audience with Ranata ! Overall, great chapter!

Wonder where Garv is? He must REALLY be ticked off to stay away. Points for Fire Blood for risking his life ( I wouldn’t be surprised if Garv beat or actually kill him) to help Little Fighter. Surprised that Ranata gave her permission to go on the hunt! Also surprised that Renata now agrees with her father!

Wow. That. Was. Unexpected. Poor Little Fighter! Garv’s daughter is beyond horrible; She’s the ‘Gru’pkna’! Garv’s reaction is completely understandable; He lived through the horror of the first hunt and wants to protect her from it. Hope this doesn’t denote the end of their relationship!

How old is Little Fighter? If she was brought to the homeworld when Garv was a Young Blood, how could he have offspring that ‘are grown warriors’ ? Is Little Fighter aging at a slower rate like the Yautja? Did Hunter give her something to extend her life? Yay Fire Blood! Beating the crap out of Vr’ek is a very positive side of his personality! So, Fire Blood has a crude sense of humor even as a Young Blood! (Love it !). A-ha! I KNEW IT! Fire Blood DID mate when he was a Young Blood! (See my review for the chapter when he killed the unnamed Young Blood!). Vr’ek got what he deserved; being killed by a kainde amedha ! And I like your depiction of the warriors being plagued by nightmares of their first hunt; It really humanizes them! (Which I LOVE!). Brilliant idea having Fire Blood use one of his severed dreads as a tourniquet! Garv is a quick thinker; Pouring the neutralizing agent on the kainde amedha blood on his back. Poor Garv ! Emotionally wounded by Little Fighter! Wonder why she feels that way? Hopefully all of my questions will be answered in the following chapters!

Little Fighter felt up Fire Blood! That is HILARIOUS! In your story ‘I wager again’ I wondered why Fire Blood said something like ‘You’ve met before’ when Little Fighter was bathing him! I just couldn’t stop laughing! I love how you had Fire Blood ask ‘Size told you otherwise hmmm?’ and Little Fighter responds ‘Yes...I thought it felt smaller than usual.’ ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT! One of my top 10 favorite moments in Predator fan fiction! I also like it that you had Fire Blood apologize for what he’d said to Garv about Little Fighter before he knew her well enough to realize that she is more than just a ‘Ooman female that helped with their hunts’. Plus, some insight into Young Blood training! Garv using his fists and feet to represent kainde amedha is BRILLIANT! All of your stories are very well written and interesting! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SHARING YOUR STORIES WITH THE WORLD!