plz plz make more so good

it's very good

hehe update sooN! :)

Hello! would you like to share your fics in a livejournal community I set up for Mr. and Mrs Smith fanfiction? Id love to have your fics there as well! :D

If youre interested email me.

I love your story please write more. I'm anxious to see what will happen next.

Hello. If youre interested in sharing Brad and Angelina fanfiction our email is

We have a group of writers and readers regarding Brad and Angelina Jolie relationship.

love this! keep going!

... So are there two Jasmines? Or are they the same one?

This is your first fic? I'm pretty impressed. I'll be honest and admit that it's definitely not the best as far as the over all mechanics (but don't mind me, I'm usually a nazi when it comes to that kind of stuff) but I do like the characterization. Some lines seem a little stiffly delivered, but I suppose that can't be helped.

Good job, looking forward to the next chapter.

John's such a dork. And Jane is just... Well, Jane.

Haha, they would argue over its gender.

CUte, I thought I had reviewed this already. I found it a few days ago and liked it, hope to read more. So update soon.

nice story

P.S. This is a really good story also because you made the characters how they act in the movie really well...not a lot of fancfiction authors can do that very good..Keep up the good work and please make the chapters longer..

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Um...are you going to continue cause I really like this story...but could you please make the chapters longer? thanks!

;)

really good...can't wait to read more