Reviews for Hunting Mayflies
bubblygoo chapter 3 . 12/29/2007
Oh my gosh, this was so funny. I smiled the whole day when I read this.
Lihanou chapter 3 . 6/14/2006
Hey, this story is great! It's not of those head-over-heels live stories, but filled with real and funny incidents. Write more please!
Mad Hattress Skylar chapter 3 . 5/3/2006
PAMS(Please add more soon)
Crystal Twilight chapter 3 . 3/18/2006
Hehe! Cute! Update soon! _
Water-star chapter 3 . 1/26/2006
Oh god Vash grocery shopping! Poor Meryl, Vash kept acting like a little kid leaving chaos everywhere.

"I wanna go outside and play!" Vash cried.

"You’re a liability. I can’t allow that."

Vash crossed his arms huffily, staring fixedly at the table. "I’m 130," he groused, "you’d think I’d be old enough to go out alone."

"Yes," Meryl replied acidly. "You’re 130 years old. When are you going to learn to grow up?"

That was favourite part! Hope you update soon.
I Heart Edward Cullen chapter 3 . 1/9/2006
This is so cute! I love the part about the freezer. The titles quite creative, I'm rather partial to it. Please update soon! Your fluff provides endless entertainment and is a nice change from the endless tradgedy fics. And the cooking!

~A Long, Long Time Ago~

*Vash is standing in front of a stove, stirring a pot, his back to you. He pours something from a bottle into the mixture and hums a bit. It starts giving off clouds of greenish-purple smoke.*

Vash: Gee, the recipe doesn't say anything about that...

KA-BLOOIE!

Narrator: And that children, is how the city of July REALLY got blown up, and why Vash's hair seems to defy gravity.

Fin

Update Soon!
Sagitarious Devil chapter 3 . 1/7/2006
Hahaha! Oh, Vash... I love you! So cute!

lol. The next chapter sounds funny! Ha! Vinegar in cake...

Toodles~~!
Angelus diabolicus chapter 4 . 12/28/2005
kya! he kissed her! / aw! cute, cute, cute! please update soon!
MoonLLotus chapter 4 . 12/26/2005
ah! update again soon please!
mystlady chapter 4 . 12/26/2005
*gasp* Oh! Someone is accusing a plagirized fanfic. I did read her fic in her website, there were some parts/scenes are cunningly familiar. But hm... hers is more romantic/serious smut but yours is more funnier scene. Though the scenes on this chapter are similar but I think yours is more original I'd say. Would you be telling the truth you didn't exactly copy the whole thing? I'm just curious.
pottachu chapter 4 . 12/22/2005
Oh, I *loved* it! Your descriptions are wonderful! I can't wait for the next chapter, please get it up soon!
Jaina chapter 4 . 12/21/2005
It's come to my attention that the latter portion of your latest chapter bears striking similarities to a section from Interjacence, a story I wrote several years ago. Not just plot, but specific phrases and interactions. I'm not saying this was done on purpose-I can see how people read something, passively absorb it, then inadvertantly use it in their own work. Still, plagiarism is still swiftly taken care of by ffnet, even if it's not intentional or copy & paste. I have nothing against the rest of your original story, but I'm afraid I need to ask you to remove or revise this chapter, otherwise I'll have no choice but to report it.
Ajd262 chapter 4 . 12/21/2005
Ah ha ha... The evil plot bunnies have goten you again! Merry Christmas!
Aine of Knockaine chapter 4 . 12/20/2005
This is a really cute story! The interacton between Vash and Meryl is priceless _ And Vash has finally taken a timid step across the invisible line that has been separating the two. It should prove quite interesting to see who takes the next step. Perhaps Milly should give a little push... okay maybe a BIG one!
Solitary Silhouette chapter 4 . 12/20/2005
E! ZOMG! :P

I love it! Absolutely love it. You have a talent for writing cute, fluffy, romantic, hilarity and for that I bow down to you. After reading this latest chapter I am very sorry i never reviewed sooner, having simply put you and this story on my alert list. This story is terrific and a must read for anyone who desires a VM fluffy quick-ish fix.

Thank-you so much for writing this. _
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