this is great Why didn't you ever update?! i'm not expecting an answer though since this is really old

When is Roy ganna find out about azen

Finally mustang how stupid do you have to be to take that long to notice?

I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! The story line is amazingly built around the characters

Is it weird that azen is one of my favourite characters? Seriously he's really cool

Oh shit - Roy's ganna find out ... Edward you and azen and stuffed! Hey Edward maybe make sure that your not bleeding out while trying to hide something, tends to make people suspicious. ( BTW this story is so cool!)

-MikaYuu136
Don't know why I put my name there but - why not?

Maybe next time Edward - CLEAN UP OR THEY WILL FIND OUT! ( love the story BTW...)

okay one, OMG the drama is amazing, two Ed x Roy I ship it, and three your style of writing is amazing, it has capitals, great story plot and the way you describe the characters is amazing too. I love the story and good luck!

- MikaYuu136

It's a really creative idea for Edward to keep the razor in his watch - smart

This is amazing - I was really happy to see that there are 13 chapters.

Omg, I love Azen. The idea of personifying all of someones fears, rage, and insecurities is really awesome! Not to mention he's sassy af

I think Mustang should tell Ed about his slip up in the office before lunch. It's important that Roy starts telling Ed everything or Ed will start to see it as a one-sided thing where he's the only one giving anything. Roy said they were going to help each other, that means he needs to be honest too. I've been in situations like this before, and I know that being open and honest is the only way to build trust. Even if Mustang decides to talk to a Psychologist, he should be the one to tell Ed that he will/did. I think that in this situation (and really good job with their personalities, by the way. You've got them down good), Roy would talk to the psychologist without mentioning the Ed's name.
Please don't feel like I'm telling you what to do. I really like how this is going, so keep up the good work.

I wish Abyss and Azen will somehow become real somehow and everyone else can see them! Too bad there's
no way of that happening by alchemy. Im sure there's no circles that could actually make things you thought up real. But it would be nice.

Well I like the story so far its pretty neat and fun to read, I kinda disagree with Ed telling Roy this so early. It kind of devalues the whole thing. I think you should have waited a little longer for the reveal and it would have helped the story more as a whole. Now the whole thing seems kind of rushed, mostly because you revealed this so early then hinted at well he is gonna tell a shrink about Ed, and this makes the story predictable, Ed is gonna be pissed at Roy, Roy will feel bad, Abyss will tell him its for his own good, Azen will argue against it, and in the end Ed will go to see the shrink and forgive Roy, if this dosen't all happen kind of like that then sorry in advance, just please add more tension to the characters and make us care more about the situation, if it is so easily solved then it holds no value to it, I do enjoy how you write I would just suggest adding some more tension to the situations and make the problems more memorable.

wow, i really like this story. i mean it is really well written. i wonder, is it bad that i sort of wish Azen was real so ed can be with him? i mean he sounds kind of cool.

wish you would write some more, this story rocks and it would be a shame not to finish it.