this story was amazing extremely well written :)

on the count of two...

This is really good, it looks at peyton/brooke/haley/bevin from a totally diffrent perspective, you should write more.

Wow, this was so intense.

Nice one :D

i just read it all in one sitting!

frickin awsome!

sequel please?

-Liza!

Wow, this story was so intense and different from any other fanfiction I'e ever read. I love it.

Also, I'm going to say this because I was kind of internally dissecting it. To me, it seemed like Lucas did what he did to show that The Four were damaging Brooke, that it was their rumour-mongering that allowed it to happen, and that they weren't always going to be there.

I thought the ending was really dramatic and kind of beautiful in an unconventional way.

Absolutely fantastic story and I'm glad that I got a chance to read it.

Conaleigh xx

that was great. i love your ending lines

sequel! sequel! sequel! i'm interested to see more brucas interaction and of course how brooke will deal with standing up to the othe three.

good chapter, im sad its ending. i hope u do a sequel i would love to see what happens to luke.

omg that was intense i loved it it was incrdable shes finally one i hope u do make a squel bec i really enjoyed reading this fic plz make seqel ...incrdable story! } (...im so0o sad its over but hoping to read more of ur fics!)

Aw, that is a great ending, Brooke finally realizing she is her own person. It's what I've wanted for her this whole time.

How sad! I don't see how Brooke can give up what her and Lucas have to keep her friends! Why can't her friends realize they aren't the only thing in her life! Gr...LOL I love this story, I'm sad there is only one more chapter. UD soon!

Why is he so pathetic? Pay back's a bitch. I think he needs to learn the art and satisfaction of drawing a plan, executing it to perfection, and destroying those who seek to destroy you.

this story is so good! but i think it would be interesting that if in senior year lucas wouldnt be loser luke and he'll be like popular or something cuz he joined the basketball team or something and then brooke wants him but he doesnt forget... i dunno

UPDATE ASAP! I LOVE THIS STORY

Brooke is evil..awe poor Luke. update soon

omg brooke is sucha bitch!but i still love her and this whole story is amzaing im serouisly in love wit it it just sux its ending so0on i hope u can make a seqel or sumthin anywayz updated so0on!)