| Reviews for The FullMetal Wizard |
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emevis chapter 14 . 7/19/2012 Please continue! PLEASE! I know it hasn't been updated since 2008, and now it's 2012, but still... Plz! |
bill560682 chapter 10 . 5/23/2008 as far as american coin jokes go can you get 50 coins to add up to 1 dollar? an so you know there are 2 answers to the puzzle. |
bill560682 chapter 4 . 5/23/2008 well as i stated before the relation between harry and this new guy could be time travel and the reason it looks as thou he only has a golden hand instead of a whole arm is he created an arm that looks human knowing that one day he would meet dumbledore and did not want dumbledore putting things together. |
bill560682 chapter 3 . 5/23/2008 i know nothing about this other world your adding in but a nice side twist could always be that the guy training harry is really an older harry who was sent back in time. of course i have no clue if it is just the guys hand that is gold or that is all we can see and his whole arm is also gold. |
bill560682 chapter 2 . 5/23/2008 hopefully we got lucky and at least cost old tommy boy a body. |
Ariana Gentry chapter 13 . 2/14/2008 You asshat. I can't believe you through a fit for me to read such a short chapter. I think I sort of see what you're doing with Terry, though. Two reasons for them to dressed that way are a)Terry is a girl and is insecure about her figure(considering terry is Sytherin, I find this to be doubtful) or b)Terry is much the same situation that Harry/Azrael was with the Dursleys, a.k.a. having to wear hand-me-downs that are too big (also unlikely). Dude, if You don't start spilling the beans on this one I'm gonna be oftly pissed off. COME ON! Boy or girl, Gin or Ron, it ain't hard. Quite trying to torment me and fess up already! Yaoi, Yuri or Het, what shall it be? |
jesseternal chapter 13 . 12/25/2007 i wish you'd tell if terry is a boy or girl. plz tell plz plz anyway i love it. i hope you update soon |
jesseternal chapter 12 . 12/20/2007 hahaha malfoy made a big mistake. plz update soon i wanna kno what malfoy is up too |
Ariana Gentry chapter 11 . 8/15/2007 YES! LUNA LOVEGOOD IS A LESBIAN! THANK YOU SIR, MAY I HAVE ANOTHER? BWAHAHAHA! Okay *cough*, that's enough of that for now. I like that Valios is all sly and Domblydor-like. Also, Thanks to the Luna/Olivia thing, I can forgive you for the Terry/unknown-Weasley thing, as well as once again leaving out Neville. Keep up the good work, and continue zee slash in zee next chapter! LEGALIZE IT! |
Kyubbi-Sama chapter 11 . 8/8/2007 SWEET! Update soon! |
Teh Lacey chapter 10 . 7/24/2007 You furry, furry BLEEPsturd! Okay,dude, your style is fuzzin' awesome, but if you are going to torture us, you must find a more effective way to hide gender other than the freaking bleeps, savvy? Also, you do realize that the lack of blatant slash means I must destroy you now? And if you must confuse us with not knowing whether it's Ginny or Ron, then you should have small scenes with each of them present. Seriously, its well written and well thought out, but with the complicated plot you have neglected several main characters... AND THE SLASH! betch... |
nouvelle.vie chapter 6 . 6/6/2007 I love this line- "pulling him from the loafers and sneakers of Death". Great stuff! I still miss Harry... but like you said, hes there. |
Pajaro Negro chapter 2 . 4/8/2007 See, now THIS is much better. It's your own work and it's interesting. I like your narrative tone. The eerie need-my-Elixir-I'm-dying part was cool, too. Is Harry going to take Ed's place, sort of? What happened? |
Pajaro Negro chapter 1 . 4/8/2007 Why did you copy from JK Rowling's work? You should have re-written it in your own words. It would have been better. :-( |
Himura-Dumbledore chapter 6 . 6/3/2006 Update! I was a bit shaken up at the thought of Dumbledore using a sword... I just can't picture it...This chapter was good though! |