You strike the feeling of hopelessness perfectly! Ya know, it's always a plus to be a poet *and* a writer. You're on top of the skill! Good job!

Another terrific poem! Wow, this reminds me a-lot of what Aragorn would be feeling. I like the phrases that you use. They're really clever, like 'the trees will support only mystery'. That's neat. Keep up the great work!

~Tari~