good story

I feel a bubble in my throat

:((((((

Excellent story.
I really enjoyed reading it.
Let me see if I have this straight:
1 Neville is the Boy Who Lived.
2 Harry is a Horcrux.
3 Remus is on the outs with Sirius and Harry.
4 Werewolf Harry and Sirius are on the run from EVERYONE.

OK, now I'm off to read Part 2.

Thanks for writing.

There actually is a (good) side which is the side with our creator. If your aligned with the causes then your on the side though there is the guy that likes to push buttons whom's only goal is to get humanity to fight each other then fight God.

The way the magic enhanced objects work remind me of the old 90s click and point kids games.

Your skipping back and forth with times is dizzying. I don't know how readers stand it or they are being politically correct.

Absolutely adored it! I have always wanted to read a story where Harry suffers from Lycanthropy and Sirius raises him and you just fulfilled my wish. Thank you so much!

Hmm. Make sense I suppose, to split them all up. Just bring back Sirius, please!

Yay, Mrs. Figg to the rescue.

nice good story :D

4 year olds don't understand tenses, so Harry feeling concerned about informing Andromeda about the correct tense when referring to his dead parents is ridiculous. And him saying it would take half an hour to reach Remus' by broomstick...no. 4 year olds don't understand the concept of time like that. To them, an hour might as well be 10 hours.

This is an interesting story, but you should research how a child this age would behave to make it more realistic. It's hard to stop being pulled out of the story with these inconsistencies.

Oh, wow. What a brilliant ending. I love how you brought this full circle, with the ending mirroring the beginning. Judging by your author's note, it sounds like you've taken some heat for this. As a mommy, I normally freak out over stories in which there is gratuitous violence or suffering inflicted upon a child. That is not what you did here. You were very compassionate in your presentation of dreadful circumstances on every occasion, regardless of who the victim was, and you had a clear focus in mind with this story. The pain that your characters, particularly Harry, were forced to endure was not done in order to create a melodramatic sob fest that would elicit a lot of responses. This was a thought-provoking, well-written, clearly planned story. I'm pretty bad about leaving feedback in general, so please excuse me if I don't reply on the sequels. But I'm eager to begin them and very thankful to have such long, complete stories awaiting me. Thank you for the massive amounts of hard work you have obviously invested into this series!

love it. i hope someone forgives Remus soon as horrible as it was it wasn't his fault

Ah this is a fantastic story! The plot is well driven and although many were wary of the Harry bitten part, I personally loved it! It gives what Sirius does a sense of desperation. I'm going to go and read the next two parts after I'm done reviewing here. One thing I'm not exceedingly fond of us Moony's reaction here, though there are two more parts to read and he might not have gotten a chance to have a good believable reaction... I've always believed that, while morbid, Remus would most likely yet to kill himself if he were to bite Harry. Its his worst fear and he just condemned the son of his best friends to his horrid life. He didn't really react here... Again he might in later stories...

Dumbledore and Sirius were spot on I think though... Here's where a good reviewer would offer advice to better your writing, but truthfully I was reading for pleasure... I'd hafta gobback and read looking for things to advise on, which means there isn't anything too big... Its a fantastic price of writing and I commend your fantastic skill...

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