Great story, looking forward to sequal

He was just taking a shower. No need to freak out Justin.

"how great camp had been – Yeah, it had been great at night – and how she hoped we would all come next year – I would have liked to have come this morning... I guess I did owe Him something for the great sex I had while here." - ROFFLMFAO! :D

"Shut up." "You shut up." "You." - Do they ever quit flirting? ;)

"You know, I meant what I said." "You've said a lot in the last five days." - *sing song* I can hear them both!

"I'll probably be coming over a lot then." - Haha Awww :)

"Everyone knows that just touching shoulders can lead to something much hotter" - Yes it can!

CRYING! I don't know if I'm happy cus it was such a cute ending, or sad that they left each other, or scared about what will happen to Brian when he gets home, or even just cus it's over, but I'm CRYING! :""""""""""""""S

"On Top" - SERIOUSLY! You choose the BEST chapter titles! ;)

"fuck, I'm going to let him top me for some extremely retarded reason." - LOL :)

Like I keep saying. Details - FUCKING FANTASTIC!

"I stand there in the darkness and watch him as he watches his fingers slowly undo the buttons down my shirt" - And that's when I stop reading this in public.

Brian teaching Justin to fuck him? Holy fuck that's fucking HOT!

"No one should express their feelings. Whoever the hell said it was a good thing to do was high" - haha :( *sad laugh*

God, Chris! I want to kick his fucking ass!

Even when they're "mad" at each other, Brian still protects Justin :)

"If I had known that screwing him a few times would make him fall in love with me you can guarantee that I would have never even said the word hi to him." - LOL :)

Brian fighting FOR Justin? To get him back? The butterflies in my stomach! I'm gonna be sick (in a good way)!

"I still l-love you" - I just got a chill through my entire body! From my head to my toe. Like a pulse of electricity passed through me! Shit! My entire body feels like there's a static current running through it!
What a rush!

Chapter title & "phrase" - why do I not want to read this?

Oh God. Saying it: not the big of a deal. The aftermath: Oh God.

That's why you don't shit where you eat.

They can't avoid each other forever!

"Justin's…mine." - AWWW :D

"You need to get up, young man. It's twelve. I've been sitting around with nothing to do for hours. Plus, the sheet says that there is fun filled activities scheduled in an hour and you missed breakfast. You need some food." - I can hear Brian PERFECTLY! :D

"The sheet of paper with the schedule." "Since when do you listen to paper?" - Now I can hear both of them :D

Let me guess, Chris Hobbs?
Called that one!

God I LOVE IT when Brian stands up for Justin

HOLY SHIT!

"you left me there with nothing good to look at or talk to the rest of the day." His smile comes back onto his face and he throws the magazine aside and bends over, takes my face in his hands, and kisses me until I'm dizzy and probably forgetting all about him "ditching" me all day." - awww :)

"we end up being seated right there." - ROFL! :)

"We wouldn't want anyone to get the right idea here" - ROFL :)

"Brian, however, is still asleep." - Of course he is

When it comes to sleep I am SO like Brian!

"I am up." - I saw that coming

"I can imagine what Marcus would say, or what any church leader would say if they walked into our cabin and saw this." - just the thought...

"Ok, for one, I don't know how the hell Justin pulled off that 'good morning, Brian' hand job without blushing. Secondly, I hate the fact that Marcus had come into our room. Thirdly, I'll have to reward Justin tonight for the wake up call because, by the looks of it, he's now the unsatisfied victim here." - I CAN HEAR Brian's thoughts! It's like I'm in his head!

"I grab him by the front of said shirt and pull him in for a long, deep kiss" - HOT!

"I want him to remember all fucking day because if he remembers it all fucking day then he'll be horny all fucking day and when he looks horny all fucking day than…my day will be pleasant" - I LOVE it! And once again, I can HEAR Brian!

"Justin – I want to fuck you so hard right now. I want to fuck you all day. I want to fuck you until you can't breathe, speak, or walk. I want to fuck. You." - WANT!

"Brian Kinney fuck me now" - LOVE! :D

"It would've been a better morning if I could've sunk my dick in a certain blond's ass." - HAHAHA ;D

"I'm jealous" LOVE it! :D

"This is the Marcus that probably has wet dreams about fucking you." - Oh God! Now I'm the one wanting to throw up!

"I'm trying to be nice to him so I can ask him if I can go to the worship center after it closes so I can have some time for myself to pray and think since my grandmother is sick and I don't feel comfortable being with other people while I'm praying for her." - HAHAHA! :D

"As long as you aren't working the magic you worked this morning." - ROFL! ;D

"I'd tie you to my bed and punish you by torturing you. Then, I'd fuck you. Hard." - DO IT!

"I can think of another way to give you protein, Kinney." - *spit drink!* LOL! ;)

"As appealing as that sounds, I really like my sausage." "I like your sausage too." "Do you have to turn everything into innuendo?" "Yes." ... "Can I have a bite of your sausage?" - Flirting and I LOVE it! :D

"I had a very hard" - HAHA! :D

"The perfect place for Brian to do me." - ROFFLMFAO! ;D

"We'll have plenty of time to do that while I'm helping you pray for your grandmother." - ROFL! God help me! :D

"There are candles lit" - how romantic

"I'm going to ask you, on a scale of one to ten, how sad you are about your poor grandmother and whatever number you say is how hard I'm going to fuck you." - Ten!

"tears in his eyes at the fact that someone's been hurting me. No one's ever looked at me like that before. No one's ever actually showed that they've felt sorry for me. No one's every made a point to let me know that they care about me." - Awww :"""S

"we're both fucked. And not in a life affirming, positive way either" - HAHA! :D

"Now that's what I call worshipping." - LOL :D

"That's probably some of the best worshipping he's seen in years." *spit drink!* ROFL! :D

Again, GREAT attention to detail! ;D

you light up the entire room." - AWWWWWWWWWW! *HOLDING MY BREATH!*

That's a good reason to use the word penetration

"He tastes strongly of chocolate and peppermint." - I wanna taste!

"protruding" - that's a big word!

I would kiss his bruises too

My reading device turned off right in the middle of this chapter! :"""(

"I'm surprised it hasn't made one of us (me) come in my pants yet. I'm not sure how we've (I've) lasted this long." - Haha :)

"when he goes for my pants, I'm goin' to be blushing like a little school girl all over again." - Haha :)

"Brian 'really fucking hot' Kinney." - hahaha :)

"I didn't think it was even possible to get any harder than I already am." - hahaha :)

"turgid" - another big word

Like I said, you know how to write descriptions. That comes in handy in a scene like this.

"Fucking Taylor's Virginity Away at Church Camp" - SO funny!

I like that God has two meanings in this story

SO HOT I literally CAN'T BREATHE! Trying with everything I have to catch my breath!

"closet hiding" - You pick the BEST chapter titles! You're very creative :)

"Your lips drop sweetness as the honeycomb, my bride; milk and honey are under your tongue." - considering that verse, I'm going to assume they finally kiss this chapter

"touch in a sexual way" - FOFL! :D

Oh My God! This story is SO AMAZING! You're definitely one of my favorite fanfic writers of all time!

"we were the rejects." - It's fun to be the rejects. What's even more fun is when the rejects come together. (Not sure if I mean that in a sexual way or not.)

"I was trying to 'calm down.'" - He needed to get rid of his woodie.

"I don't think his cheeks have ever been their natural color around me. I feel slightly proud at that." - Haha ;)

"The only reason I wanted to tackle Justin was because, well, yeah." - HaHa ;)

I bet if Brian actually gave a damn he'd be... He'd kick ass at flagfootball

"Like I really gave a damn that I was ruining my teams chances." - Haha :)

"I like his laugh." - Aww :)

"I wish we could do other things tonight then talk about my fucked up home life." - Haha ;)

I can literally feel their emotions! What is this sorcery!?

You're such an amazing writer, like it literally kills me!

"Aren't you supposed to be limping?" - I can HEAR Brian!

"to be alone with him…in a cabin…in a dark cabin…and the door locked…" - I'm really hungry for that too ;)

"He was coming on to you." - WHAT!?

"He's a church leader. Bible thumper. 'Oh, God, faggots should go to hell' type of guy." - LOL! :)

"I was jealous because I saw you first." - AWWW! I just SQUEED into a corner!

"You already hide in the closet anyway. What's one more to hide in?" - 8O Ohhh... BURN!

I LOVE it when he first calls him Sunshine! :D

"you light up the entire room." - AWWWWWWWWWW! *HOLDING MY BREATH!*

"Killing Kittens" - That's some (chapter) title!

"'We're here.' No fucking way." - ROFL! :D

""Thank God he told us…I had a feeling I was gonna get lost." - ROFL! :D

I think If I knew Brian in real life I'd be laughing all the time and I don't think I'd be able to keep my cool.

"If they know how to read and I'm sure they do 'cause every one of them had brought a Bible with them." - ROFL! :D

"like the good kids we are, we follow him towards a small white building with no sign." - Well that sounds creepy... and rape-y.

"he's probably going to show us a Bible movie or something. I almost groan out loud in distaste" - I did the same thing! :D

You wanna explain to me why it's called "killing kittens." Seriously!

So you're kittens? Ok! ROFL!

"Kittens never curse or swear." - Fuck! There goes my fucking plans for this fucking week!

I don't like Marcus!

"two kittens playing with each other." - And now I'm picturing kittens doing nasty things to each other

"Kittens never play pranks on peers." - Kittens (Brian) always play pranks on peers

"Kittens never say bad things about each other." - Kittens (Brian) alway say mean things about everyone

"Kittens are not like people." - How?

"When you're bad…God kills a kitten." Holy shit! *CRINGING*

"there's a picture of a bloody kitten on the screen" - OH MY GOD! WHY!? Brainwashing! What kind of Christian, church, video is this!? HOLY SHIT!

"Be good. Save a kitten" - LOL! :)

"Brian starts bursting out laughing and I join him." - I LOVE my boys! :D

Marcus... I do not like Marcus!

"Brian…you just killed a kitten." - ROFL! :)

I wonder how many kittens you can... kill... if you... *stopping right there* have gay sex... at church camp. ROFL! Oh God!

"I've killed millions of kittens by this point. What's one more?" - HAHAHAHAHA :)

"I nod in agreement and shove him back." - Quit flirting!

"That eager to get me alone?" - Yes! Yes! And more yes!

"Oh, so you don't want to get me alone then?" - Shut up stupid!

"Are you sure you don't want to get me alone 'cause, to me, it looks like you're trying to get me as far away from everyone as possible." - Yes, yes he is.

"First you get the window seat on the bus and now you get the window bed too. Talk about selfish." "What? You really care that much?" He pretends to look offended. "Yes. I wanted to the window bed." "Too fucking bad, whiner." - Such flirts! Seriously, the sexual tension is through the roof (of this tiny cabin)!

"that rule thing said Kittens are sweet so you should be sweet and give me this damn bed." - LOL! :)

"I don't want to make myself harder then I already am." - HaHa. I told you! That sexual tension is THROUGH THE ROOF!

"guess we could share it." Oh. God. Yesyesyesyes." - My thoughts exactly!

"I'm going to come in my pants." - hahaha ;)

"Well…it did says kittens were sweet…and cuddly…and polite…so the polite thing to do would be to share this bed with you and I don't want to kill another kitten so…" - Nice! :)

Seriously, it's like I'm sucked into this world! All I can see is this scene! It's like I'm standing in the corner of the cabin watching this go down.

"Then his tongue comes out and swipes across my lips" - Holy shit! ;)

"How 'bout your dick up my ass right now?" - YES!

"I changed my mind. This bed is fine." - Fuck! Brian! Fuck! Fuck you!

"impressive erection in his jeans, flushed cheeks, and a look of hardcore want and need drawn on his face." - I don't know what I love about this. I just do. Probably the amazing description.

"Who uses the word 'alrighty?'" - Haha :)

"loving the affect I have on him."- Haha ;)

I never really read multi-chapter fanfictions, but I'm in LOVE with this one

how they can kill all the homosexuals in the universe so they can make the world a better and cleaner place." - Don't make me laugh!

"'Brian!' God. I probably sounded so stupid. And looked stupid." Awww *bite lip* :)

"You know…we could run. Right now. Just skip this fucking camp thing." - YES! DO IT! PLEASE!

"We can sell ourselves on the street. I hear they make good money." - ROFL! :D

"I almost pounce on him and fuck him right here on this bench." - I'd like to see that

"I'm going to make this blond mine before this camp weeks over. I'm going to fuck him everywhere at camp. Christen every fucking thing at the campsite." - PLEASE do!

"I'm sure God will love it." - Well God is happy when his people are...

"I'm sure there are some young, hot studs just waitin' for a hot blond with a nice ass." - Shit! Did he really just say that!? Brian Kinney really does give no shits!

""Do you have a partner, Brian?" - ROFFLMFAO!

Shit! Fuck! Yes! This is gonna be the best fucking camping trip I've never been on! :"D *smiling like an idiot*

"I may be forced to fuck him right here on the bus" - HOLY SHIT!

"Bible thumpers" - I like that term :)

"now he's being quiet" - only because you made him nervous, now I'm nervous too.

"by pulling his head over onto my shoulder, my arm across his shoulders." - Aww :)

"I recline both our seats and I rest my head on top of his, his hair tickling my chin but I don't dare move and maybe wake him, and quickly fall asleep." - I can picture that :)

"they'd get the right impression of why my arm's around him." - LOL! :)

"other people who might get the wrong/right idea about this scene." - Love it! :)

"fingers beginning to knead against my skin in a slow massage before they trail upwards into my hair where they begin to play with it." - You use GREAT descriptions! I can totally picture this!

"What the fuck am I doing snuggling against another male on a bus full of fag haters?" - Good question!

"'Good afternoon, princess.' ... ok. Fine. Princess it is."- Haha :)

"Marcus hates you." - LOL! :)

"He doesn't hate me. That would be a sin." - HAHA :)

And yes, he falls into Brian's lap :D

"You're such a disruption." "I didn't fall on purpose." "I bet." - Such flirts! ;D

I've never really liked long fics, but this one's REALLY good! And FULL of sexual tension!

You know how to write comedy!

"Fuck. No. ... Oops, did I say that out loud? ... I'm perfectly fine here. Now, go on so I can learn more about God."- ROFFLMFAO! I'm gonna spit my food out of my mouth! ROFFLMFAO!

"tell me I should ask God for forgiveness for using such profanity in His house." - I'm laughing SO hard!

"I just came to make sure you were positive about not having any prayer requests 'cause I think it's really important that you share them so everyone can pray as a huge group effort." - ROFFLMFAO!
That's it! I'm done! I can't! I've lost the ability to go on! I literally can't!

"most likely straight." - You never know ;) Even if he is, convert him!

"obviously straight" - don't make me laugh!

"I'm sure I'm the only gay person in our church." - Stop it! Seriously! I'm laughing so hard it hurts! I can't breathe!

When they introduce themselves to each other I can't help but smile so wide it hurts :D

"'Now I'm going to shake your hand' It's just an excuse to touch his beautiful hand." -ROFFLMFAO! :D

"The touch goes straight to my cock" - 8O *spat food!* What!? WOAH!

"fuck my virginity off the planet." - 8O WOAH!

"get dragged out of the church by an usher" - I LOVE that!

"Because I saw the face of God in church today." - ROFL! :D *clap*

Brian's so smart! :D

"His bright smile when straight to my needy cock." - LOL ;)

I LOVE that Brian noticed everything about Justin, even the little things! :D

poor justin he tells brian he LOVES him which i think is so so sweet and he does this i mean come on does he really have to be such a dick about justin loving him? i mean ok dont say it back but this is just asshole central :( in other words i LOVED this chapter fablous job i must add

gosh that would suck really bad i hate being outside and i barely can sit through one mass a day much less three good thing my church doesnt have that or i would have already have been signed up heck my name would be first on the list:) but anyway...i like the way you explained justin in brians point of view i wonder i brians a virgin...lol funny right i wonder really if hes a "whore" like the show ill find out later i bet hmm.. sorry about the long reveiw im really through

I really loved that. I don't normally like AU stories, but that was brilliant. Thanks.