yes i wish there was more for these two! beautiful story

this story is greeeeat! 0.0

Dearest Anime-Angel-Ash,

I do not know if your are even active on this site anymore. But I feel it's necessary to to give you my utmost gratitude for this story. I recently finished Unwavering Symphony (it had me so hooked it took me only a week). But I was surprised to see that you had stuck with a story five years in the making and let me tell you..it is an absolute masterpiece. Being completely honest, I don't go onto fanfiction expecting to find well-written novellas. But in all sense of the word, your story was perfect. It was written absolutely beautifully, the relationships established were real and tangible, as well as paced very well. Your plot was incredibly detailed and believable. The emotions that you gave the characters were so fitting and perfectly described that I felt myself agonizing along with Shuyin as he fell into madness and falling in love with the beautiful relationship they both shared. You really did this couple justice and I am so happy to say that I felt your story could truly be what actually happened to the two. Hell, I'll send it to Square Soft myself, "Here. This is what your fanbase is capable of. Why didn't you make it this epic?" In any case, my dear author, I do not know how old you are, where you live, or what you may be going through right now, but I would just like to say that I would LOVE to see future stories about ffx from you. Whether or not that's possible, I don't know. But I thought I'd let you know. I'd gladly wait 1000 years for a tiny ficlet from you (heh heh see what I did there?). Anyway once again thank you for doing this. You brought me back to fandom and my love for this game and this couple.

Thank you for telling their story.

Sincerely, Fuzz

So happy to see this finished! And the wait was well worth it. Brilliant fic. Very well thought out and very detailed. Thank you for seeing it through.

-tears up-. Happy to see you finally finished in 6 years, but the fic was worth the wait. Why do I feel like this chapter should be longer? I would have liked to know what happened after the two died, like how the battle ended. I'm also glad you decided to not include Nooj and Baralai's encounters with Shuyin even though it could have created a better understanding of his hatred.

Sad to see this unfinished still. It's honestly the best Lenne-Shuyin fanfic I've ever came across. Here's a little encouragement to ya, if you're still out there somewhere, to start it up again~

I read your entire story,and if you still come on a damn excellent writer.

damn is all i can i don't .excellent..

Please Update! I love the story so far. I know it's going to end soon, but I would like to see the story end rather than be left unfinished.

Well, I'm glad I finally decided to stray from the usual T/Y pairing, this story is magnificent! So far i think you've gotten Shuyin spot on, I'm enjoying your vocabulary too, quirky words like iota... i don't know why, but I enjoy the story so much more when i come across common but fairly unused words like iota and ten-fold. Very good job, now on to ch2.

YES! I was so afraid that you had given up on this story. THANK YOU x 1 million.

Wow, it was totally by luck that I found this story again. I don't know if I had an account then, but I might have been the anonymous reviewer 'Matt.' Anyway, I thought this was abandoned, so when I saw it I was pretty happy. This is the best Shuyin/Lenne fic out there.

The female Cid was an interesting change, lol. Interesting to note the similar personality XD

Poor Shuyin ( He's slowly descending into madness. Great job on that- he's slowly turning into the shadow he was in FFX-2.

Well, it'll probably take a long time for another update, but I'll wait. I can put you on alerts this time. I'd love to see another chapter soon, but if real life gets in the way, i'll understand. Great chapter, and if you celebrate it, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year )

Oh my god. This story has left me sitting in my room just stunned. Wow. The characters are captured perfectly, every event accounted for. Shuyin and Lenne are not just a reflection of Tidus and Yuna, but separate individuals with different pasts and personalities. I want to get to the heart wrenching end. PLEASE UPDATE. In all seriousness. I was reading this story at different points of the day, and getting back into my life was so hard. I was so sad and sorry the whole day, and I couldn’t wait to get back to the story. I enjoyed every second of this torture. Wow….. I guess now I can only sit and wait for you to update. I feel like now I should ignore any other fanfictions, and just think for the next few hours.

WOW

same as last poster. i really look forward to your updates.

take as long as you need to. i'll still be checking with hope of a new chapter every month. :]

I'm so relieved to know that you plan on continuing this story. I greatly anticipate every chapter, but at the same time, I'll be a little saddened once it ends.

But poor Shuyin..

So far, you're use of grammar and punctuation are very good, which really helps me, the reader, have clean controlled reading and not struggle over what you wrote. You're plot, and character development is at a nice slow pace which brings a factor of realism to the characters and their own personal conflicts. You're not pulling any punches as far as what should be expected with the character of Lenne, but your discription of Shuyin seems relatively believable. Wether or not you've beaten the game, I'm not sure, but you're subtle analysis of Lenne being more passive and timid with Shuyin is somewhat disconcerning. Your discription of the environment and poetic writing style is unique and refreshing, but don't overdo it. Sometimes simplicity can be the best writing, case-and-point Hemmingway. Overall I'd give you a B, I'm enjoying this story.