Please! I need more!

I loved this. :D

I haven't lost hope! ANOTHER UPDATE MUST COME!

I guess it's a bit much to hope for an update...

Poor mike...

good story

Type your review for this chapter here...

I think somebody ought to teach winks a lesson after what he did to those poor kids. Nobody deserves that kind of torture! Poor Mike. I just wanted to give him a huh the past few chapters. It's just not banana!

It was a good story, albeit depressing at the end (at least it didn't have some cheesy, mushy ending). I liked story, it was unique and well-written. I think the ending could use some work though.

Finding it highly unlikely you even read this review more than five years late,

~The QAS

I think somebody ought to teach winks a lesson after what he did to those poor kids. Nobody deserves that kind of torture! Poor Mike. I just wanted to give him a huh the past few chapters. It's just not banana!

It was a good story, albeit depressing at the end (at least it didn't have some cheesy, mushy ending). I liked story, it was unique and well-written. I think the ending could use some work though.

Finding it highly unlikely you even read this review more than five years late,

~The QAS

Interesting. I will point out, however, that even in the 2005 movie, where he is considerably older, Mike Teavee is only 13. This would put him in 7th or 8th grade (unless of course he skipped a grade . . . which is actually not entirely unlikely considering his incredible intelligence). Yet, by the sound of this story, it seems as if they are in high school. Just a comment. Still, I like your characterization of him. I, too, have recently developed an obsession with Mike Teavee. The writing is good, too, but I recommend that you make your chapters a little longer in the future. Overall, good start.

Ooh, and just for the record, wolves are pack animals-they live in groups and are very social. Sometimes wolves, especially young males, DO wander off on their own, but their survival rate is much lower. Sorry, I'm an animal-geek.

interesting

i don't like the whole kissing verruca but you should bring violet back i mean she and him have the lasting effects, shes going to be blue and bendy for the rest of her life and hes going to be tall and well, skinny! others are just covered in chocolate and trash. they both have a love for violence! plz have him and violet together, claire and daneil defenate and mostly charlie and verruca best couple 2nd from violet/mike!

I liked it, interesting about what was going through his mind. I like the converstations going on when Wonka was having a flashback. And the fact that he didn't meet up with Claire as an epilogue was a good idea. Favorited.

Please dont tell me this is the end. What about Claire and Daniel? And I think you should use the same plot for the other 3.

WOW this was great! Are you going to continue? PLEASE CARRY ON!