I like this. A lot. And I'm trying to be optimistic, so I'm following this as well. Waiting for you to follow through on your promise of it getting even better.

OMG I love it! Spike should totally be in the next chapter!

one word to discribe this... AWOSME!

Awesome story but it seems you won't update it :( Please if you have any spare time update this story !

I just read your story and I really enjoyed it so far. I hope that you continue, it's really good and I can't wait for more, especially Kira and Spike to meet again.

o this story is so good so far please come back and start writing it again

Hope you update soon, really want to see where this sory go's. It's good so far.

Umm ok Kira not one of ur best writting pieces very pradictable, well probably cause i kno u but still. I liked the come and get me vamps bit lol. he he I love fred and george they rock my socks. lol, keep writing i want to read more, but be a bit spontaneious (o big word think I spelt it wrong knowin' me I most likely did.)

Cya Tapanga

I like this story. It is a good story. Please keep writing this story and update soon.