Supposed to have been posted 22 June 2012, at and the Coruscant Entertainment Center in my The Critic's Two Cents. Everyone say; 'Mach is a flake, Mach is a yo-yo'. Better yet (Waves hand) 'Mach is trying, but he's still a flake'. My computer went down again in June of 2012 with a virus. Sorry...

Mandalorian Wars at Malachor V: The defenders prepare for the attack

The piece is twenty chapters long, so I didn't have time to read very far. This segment is the orders for preparation.

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SO very sad and awesome at the same time. I made it through the whole thing in one day since it is the holidaze I had the time and could not stop reading. Thank you for telling me about this story. Arigato, Kendoka-san!

WHEW! What a battle! I was afraid she was going to lose Jorath. sigh.

Gripping fight between Mai Ling and Canderous-made me shudder when he licked the blood on his blade but it was so Mandie! And why will Malak never listen?

The General eternally surprises me with her lack of warmth for her people. In my story I had Cho always be the inspiration for her people and my Revan knew of their devotion to the General so she included them in the ones who would fall at Malachor V. Humph-but that was just rambling because this story sings a song of its own and its music is beautiful and raucous and bold and glorious!

OOH-revelation so it's Kayla who "Saves" Jaq! Makes more sense than some stranger coming after him. Malak's strength really came across in the fight. He can be a tough battle in the game especially if you choose the weakest of the Jedi -no Guardian or Sentinel but is it Counselor? Word desertde me for right now, Have more reading to do! Hope you're happy!

AWESOMR! Sometimes nly one word comes to mind.

Ttoally unexpected move-which I expect from a writer of your caliber-Poor Bao-so that;s how he lost his arm!

Cool, ho wyou had Atton's resiliance they give him in the game come into play and of course his Pazaak and lust. Master Uthar was a surprise! SO GOOD!

Great scene with Atton and revealing his Pazaak secret. Malak is going to be so PO'd at Revan to take away his moment of glory but he is such a bad tactician. Sigh... more to read. YAY!

Oh NOZ! Atton got shot? Makes sense really, even though he has the devil's luck. Canderous is up to somehing and I am interested to see his deviation and Rev's counter.

Uh oh, does not look good for Canderous and I was glad to see Seja made it since I thot a Jedi should not have gone down so easily. Rand to the rescue! Good strategy and so relieved Carth wasn't shot down. I mena, we know he lives but I thot you were gonna shoot him down and he'd be in peril on Malachor V for the big event.

I just wrote one and it did not look like it was accepted so I will try again. Sorry to see such a grisly end to the lovers, but Carth's battle was fantastic. Shouldn;t he be ORANGE LEADER though? Ma bad! Heh heh heh

You did an excellent job with Canderous-showing him as he was and the comparison as to how he will end up is always there, too. Atton almost got him! I like all the cloak and dagger stuff, Always was a Rainbow 6 fan and 24 etc., so all this tied in to the SW universe is cool.