| Reviews for Ordinary World |
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Guest chapter 7 . 4/19 Fantastic. Love Jazz |
Nathem chapter 7 . 3/22 This is really good i never thought I’d enjoy reading on Jazz’S pov |
dangerousphantomwaffles chapter 7 . 11/5/2015 Adorable. Thanks for writing jazz! Not enough people do. |
SunBinamra chapter 7 . 9/3/2015 I love the way you showed Jazz's struggles as "the Only Normal Fenton" but also subtly slipped in some of her idiosyncrasies, like her habit of whining and telling on Danny. It makes her seem more human and very much in character. Loved this! |
Guest chapter 7 . 6/19/2015 I love this, especially the incubus/succubus bits. |
scifijoe chapter 6 . 1/21/2015 hi, when i first read this story, i was impressed by the way you wrote Jazz. I was glad when Jazz finally told the gang that she knew about Danny. One question though, I thought Jazz was a Senior or a Junior at least? If so, if Paulina is also a Freshman, Jazz would out rank her by Jazz's higher grade. If Paulina is her equal, than Jazz could use that against her for picking on younger kids. Just thinking. I loved the Wedding Reception scene. |
peacelight24 chapter 1 . 3/30/2014 I just wanted to comment and say that I think you have a really good handle on Jazz's character, and I'm impressed by your story. It reminds me a little of The Great Gatsby or Wuthering Heights with the whole tell-the-story-from-the-perspective-of-a-sideline-character. Although Jazz has much more importance/influence than either of the characters referenced, especially in regards to your fic specifically seeing as the majority of it is about her and her growth anyways, but yeah. I think you get what I mean. Good job on the fic! Just out of curiosity, what did you think of Jane Eye? |
Lilith Evanson chapter 1 . 5/16/2013 Alright, I know this is going to sound weird but I read this story back in 2005 and I was just beginning my 8th grade year. I am now graduating college and to my complete surprise I found your story again after remembering it while I was tutoring a friend and helping her write a paper on suicide. I just want you to know that your story really stood out to me out of all the Danny Phantom stories I have ever read. Thank you so much for writing such an amazing fanfic. Thank you so much for being a part of my childhood. Thank you so very much. Honestly, this fanfic is one of the few fanfics I remember reading when I was 14. I remember it being one of my very favorites and I am just so happy to have found it again, a real coincidence! |
spinshivers chapter 7 . 9/24/2012 Beautiful story! :D People should write awesome stuff like this more often! :D |
pikachucat chapter 7 . 7/27/2012 awesome story |
Shebali chapter 7 . 12/5/2011 Oh, Jazz... She should get more love. I'm glad I got to read this, this story is so lovely, and the characters, all of them, are so alive. Enjoyed this work very much. |
anonymous chapter 7 . 4/21/2010 Wow, I just finished the fic, and I must say that this is one of the most comprehensive portraits of the characters' "regular" lives. The story definitely reads smarter than your average action episode, and you made Jazz absolutely realistic. Thank you for writing something for those of us who are overachievers yet are surrounded by people whose strength we struggle to comprehend and from whom we draw inspiration. |
jk chapter 7 . 4/7/2010 Serious and fluffy and cute. And just like life. Brava. |
Star Fata chapter 1 . 2/24/2010 Read the entire thing. Loved the rumours, and kudos to Jazz's struggles with her essay. |
no one chapter 6 . 1/30/2010 i LOVE phish food! |