i loved this story, i have read it before a long time ago and i thought the same thing. i am going to add it to my favorites along with the sequel too!

A beautifully written story with a heartbreaking ending :( There had better be a sequel!

I can see from your other stories that you are still writing. I loved this story, perhaps to dream of a sequal?

aww... its really good

please continue! i really enjoy ur writing and u have inspired me to write again about alex and olivia. thank you and i believe u are very talented.

Hammond's a real , even though he's "just doing his job". Shouldn't this be M..continue! Please! More of the rather heartwrenching sadness and happy, hot "don't forget me" stuff! ;)

Yuki V.

Wonderful. Love it. More, more!

Frigging amazing. I want more.

that is so a great story ... my favorite story :)

wow that was a great story. you totally captured what it must have been like to be in that situation!

this is a brill story and really well written, hope u change the ending so they can stay together lol i'm such a romantist :D

Love the family happiness. Kinda sad for them as they know the leaving again is approaching. Hope you got more planned, cause I would like a happy ending.

Awe, this story just keeps getting sweeter and sweeter.

I don't think Olivia's heart will be the only one broken when Alex and Adia have to leave...*tear*

Heartbreakingly beautiful. You made me cry. I hope there is more coming cause I really want a happy ending if at all possible.

*tear*

Great chapter.