Reviews for A Long Walk Alone In The Dark
ZenyZootSuit chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
Great job! I loved this scene...
No Longer in Operation chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
great one-shot!
azab chapter 1 . 1/29/2010
loved it great job :
songofmars chapter 1 . 12/20/2009
oh, UNF. Thank you so much for writing this! Every time I watch this movie, I want them to molest each other (even though I know it would be twisted). So glad you wrote this. It was so very satisfying.
musicalexpert chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
This story makes me go :D
angrw chapter 1 . 10/23/2007
It really should have been this way...
LarnieRae chapter 1 . 7/10/2007
*gasp* That was amazing! I loved it, really I did. Don't we all wish that's what really happened in the bathroom scene? I know I certainly do. :P

Good job!
FluidDegree chapter 1 . 5/25/2007
very interesting take on when he decided that he would steal her.
Kaikamahine Mai Hawai'i chapter 1 . 2/6/2007
This WOULD have been an interesting twist the the movie! Good job!
VeroniqueClaire chapter 1 . 12/19/2006
Excellent tension, and the dialog is great - this could pass as professional. Cheers!
LizzyPop chapter 1 . 11/23/2006
Holy shit, that was amazing. I think you were able to capture Lisa's defiance yet fright so perfectly. Sometimes people make her to mouthy. I absolutely loved their conversation, and Jackson's bit about her being a boring wife was amazing.

I also love how you wrote them returning to normal after the bathroom scene. I absolutely love this:

“I agree entirely,” he said smoothly.

So simple, but so great. Both were so perfectly in character. Great job. I hope you keep writing RedEye fanfics. You're really good.
Alexis Erika Rose chapter 1 . 7/19/2006
I loved it.
NicolinaN chapter 1 . 5/7/2006
This is a very sweet snippet. Plausible, unlike som others out there. I like it a lot. Tension, tension, tension...

Nic.
caro chapter 1 . 2/19/2006
gah! i love you. this is my first and my last personal favorite...thou art the most gifted RE author EVER. :)
RLBB chapter 1 . 1/28/2006
Loved it!

Written very well!

I wish it was in the movie .
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