Give it more variation.

bad Ino! but really good story so far :)

update soon!

Great work do more please!8!

oh no,,sasuke! hurry up, or naruto is in big trouble~~

can't wite for next chapter!

update soon :)

WOW! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! oh! it's so brilleant! It really draws you in! loven the sasunaru 3 hehe you better keep this up cauze I got you on STORY ALERT AND FAVE!

I fell in love with this story after reading the blurb and wow...what a fantastic story. Although, it was kinda mind boggling for Naruto to fall in love with Sasuke right away but overall I really love this story!

You should make your own plot based on original story mars..

this is really good. i was wondering when someone was going to write a Naruto story over MARS and here it is! cant wait for the next chapter! *Waves goodbye while givinga cheeky smile* until next time...

that last sentence of the preview was really corny..

Well I want to read more! So please update!

this is a total dead ringer for Peach Girl o_O;

ahh i like how you put it though it seems you forgot naruto isnt ah forgot her name but HE isnt HER. based on how you had him earlier in the story he shouldve been scared yes, but still yelled and got angry...

i dont mind substituting characters, but like, could you try and make it your own? otherwise its just copy/paste (

im not trying to beat ya down. you just have lotsa talent to be doin this so amateurishly Dx

dang i keep trying not to... uhh please keep writing!

aw poor naru ino is bitch i would have thought it was skankura

Very nice! I've never seen a SasuNaru like this before... I like that Naruto's apparently not an utter loser here, like most people put him as. 3

Such a wonderful story please continue and fast Pretty please with SasuNaru on top?

I really like this story and would love to see how it continues. Do we get to see orchimaru as well? I liked Kabuto harrassing Naruto, and Sasuke coming for rescue.