good story

ooh what a great story. i cant wait to read mroe, if you continue

A bit too surreal. The basic concept is fine, but the form it takes is too off to be emotionally moving. The ending seems far too contrived and convenient.

A disappointing finish to a great begining story.

Odd. The story seems to be loosing focus, becoming a bit too removed from character-reality.

Humorous. Good believable Jess-Luke and Jess-Dean dialogue. The one thing that seemed a little off was Jess's revealing he slept with Rory. Considering the way that the action played out, it seems that it would have been more in character for him to say nothing alluding to the event, feeling highly embarassed and angry. Otherwise, quite good.

Powerful. The narrative continues to engage and hold my interest. Well done. You possess compelling writing skills.

Captivating. My only issue is that the following chapters need to have the necessary psychological followup, to keep this action consistnet with the characters involved.

Very good. It builds well on the Gilmore Girls background and style, while also contributing a unique addition. I can hear Jess's voice in your lines, always a good sign in fanfictions. I'm interested in seeing where this is going.

I loved this! I wish it would really happen on the show. Maybe not exactly like this but I love the idea of an intervention. Espessially by Jess...I want jess and rory to end up together, but I have doubt for that ever happening. I loved the end where the whole town votes and supports rory, cuz you could so see them doing that.

Great story!

Jess is amazing, dont you think? He is absolutly perfect!

I cant wait to see him back on the show!

That was a great ending, and a very believible one too.

The characters are all so well written!

love it

Hey,

that was a great ending to this story.

this is really good!i like it alot!update soon please!

i loved ur script please write more!

Good and funny story. Can't wait to read the last chapter!

Who had a passionate kiss?