This story was going so well until the ending. You killed it with Naruto's nonchalant attitude. Sure, the situation needed some lightening, but it felt like a letdown. I'm not saying that romance should develop instantly or anything, I just think that the wrap up could have been much better. By the way, you mentioned Asuna in this story, didn't you mean Asuma?

Thanks for sharing.

i do not know how you do it but all of your stories are good!

I really, REALLY enjoyed that story. I had a feeling that Shizune and Tsunade had been talking about a plant, so I had a laugh all the way through. I've noticed that in a lot of your stories, these two don't actually end up together. Despite the fact that I'm a naruhina FanForLife, I like that fact. There's always just enough hint at the fluff to keep things going and interest piqued. You've kept my interest piqued, so thanks. I'm glad that you made a follow up story to this, or else I'd be asking for more. Thanks again and NJOY!

Awesome, its official: you do the best Naruto Hinatas.

It had taken her a while to find orange flowers with black markings.

wow, I wonder how long she's managed to find one of those?

Hinata seems to always misunderstand things...poor girl. But it was funny and yet true...I could've done the same I guess.

that was so CUTE! LOL...Poor Hinata...THANKS:D

Fluff! Everyone needs a dose of it from time to time, and today was my day for it. You know, after sitting in a hospital all day and going through nearly the same thing as Hinata (minus the deathbed confession), I found this to be very true to life. The emotions and everything were absolutely perfect!

Anyway... Thanks for the bit of cheer. I needed that! _

Ja ne!

Great story. Hinata crying while she talked looked a bit silly. But ending surely was great, so funny :) I thought Hinata surely was going to run for it...

lol Great story! I love how Hinata thought Naruto was dying and she spilled her guts out to him. _ I hope Hinata will get to hear Naruto's story one day~ I love reading your fics. _ Keep up the great job~

Haha, misunderstandings, I love em. Now I have to go review the sequel. Keep up the good work.

very good story, I enjyoed that quite a bit

Haha! I sort of knew that Tsunade and Shizune wern't talking about Naruto, but it was still funny. Good work. You really put them out. I bet you'll have a new NaruHina fic out by tomorrow. Can't wait :)

Good Job!

Loved it. Very funny ending. Iwonder how this story would be like,though, if you made the entire confession scene a full monologue. That would be interesting, long certainly.

You've been reading Negima lately, haven't you? Haha, just teasing.

Hey Hey!

"naked in a frozen waterfall" huh?

(wink, wink _~)

aw Tha is so cute! You should do a sequel where Hina DOES get hurt and Naruto tells her about his life while she is in a coma and he falls for her ;) It sjust a suggestion since this one came out so beautifully

Great job!