you made me cry... good story tho

Good story so far. Please continue-I'm sure I'm not the only reader who is dying to know why Slade didn't kill Cyborg, and what is still in store for him.

BOoyahs! ~Vin

Slowly finding both himself and the meaning of living again. (that true living, friends; someone to talk to, the presence of another person, the feeling of care comming from their eyes and smile)And the courage to try. Gaining an ali and maybe rebuilding a new team(unbeknownst to himself)

pretty good chapter, I'm actually more impressed with how this is going. Seeing as I had no idea what type of storyline you might attempt to take us on. Keep up the great job, dlsky

Very nice pair of chapters. VERY nice. I really, really, really like the story! XP Very dark, very angsty... I love the plotline and the way the story's moving.

I'm glad you've made a return to writing, I've really missed your stories. _

~Raven

Pretty cool. Although, i almost expected Robin to survive but you still did a good job with Cyborg. I like how he has been stalking around the tower and Jump City for the past twenty years and tries to make that one little difference that can atleast make something better. I look forward to the next chapter!

Keep it up. I want to read more. -

I've always loved your writing and I think you deserve a lot more reviews than you get. Keep up the great work, as always.

One word:: AWESOME! D I liked that a ton... he he... seconds. XD lol I like how you did all of this. Very nice! Keep it up! Love ya! :hug:

~Blood~

This was awesome! I really liked this a lot. Who knew that the titans could get killed by Slade so easily. ;) Hey, I thought this was an awesome first chapter. D Definitely can't wait for the next one! Keep it up! Love ya! :hug:

~Blood~

Wow what a chapter, that was very intense and vivid. I think it was well written. I have no idea where you might go with it though, but I'm game...I'll waite and see what you come up with.

Your imagination for killing each Titan off was rather observational. Using each of the titan's predictable reactions and moves to act and eaches weekness to find that hole that Slade could use to kill them each off.

I do however wonder why if Slade planned all along to kill Robin off did he not do it when he threw the acid at him. Why wait till later and shoot him? Or did he not intend to kill him off, but after his violent beating he reacted and killed him off.

Anyway it was a great storyline, and very well written chapter. As Always your a great author/Writer.

dlsky

Hallo, Morph!

I must say, you've done it... again. Again. O.O Weird, jus, but you have proved yourself a greatly talented writer with each new story. Forgive my lack of usual hyperness, I'm trying really hard to surpress the sugar rush. (Is it working?) I just don't think TYPING LIKE THIS! would be appropriate for the story.

Anyways. I love the story. It almost made me cry. i_i I can't wait to see what happened.

Oh my goodness... Poor Star... and poor Robin...

Update soon, please. Cliffy attack.