Reviews for Dear Diary
Snwh122 chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
once again the lack of reviews was sad, but I loved how you did this )

Very funny, I don't know how but the sudden pbsession with Ramen was hilarius. Great job, I couldn't contain the laughter
Missmybcmiyuki chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
aww, great story

loved the part about the ramen and hiashi. who knew he's love ramen w
jcbat21 chapter 1 . 6/18/2008
why are you so good? this story rates as one of your best... in fact i think all of your stories are good... keep them up please!
Chao Yang chapter 1 . 5/30/2008
XD

I'm sorry, I had nothing else to describe my reaction.

-Chao Yang
just delete this goddamn acc chapter 1 . 4/2/2008
Hahaha! That was hilarious! I laughed so hard I almost cried! Hooray for Naruto, and hooray for you!
kaptin-hippy chapter 1 . 12/28/2007
Really good. I like an author who can grasp the fundamentals of basic grammar. Based on the quality of this story, I think it's safe to believe your other stories will be as good.
Somebody chapter 1 . 9/20/2007
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG! THAT WAS TO CUTE! AH I'M GOING TO SCREAM FROM THE CUTENESS OF IT ALL! I LOVED IT!
Trayne chapter 1 . 8/3/2007
I don't think I've ever read a NaruHina story in which Naruto interacts with Hiashi in a POSITIVE manner. This, and your other stories are great; I love the variety of genres that have everyone all in character.

Rock on.
kemiztri chapter 1 . 7/5/2007
omg! that was hilarious. i just kept bursting out in laughter all throughout the fic. hope i didn't wake the family up.

great fic! loved the style and humor.
Blue Bragon chapter 1 . 10/28/2006
This is so funny please do something like this again
Ashira-chan chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
Review for Dear Diary:

First of all, I would like to congratulate you for doing such a great fan fiction. Ü To be honest, I didn't want to read your fiction at first (I'm afraid of the word count) But then, I decided to save that page and read it on my computer if I have time. After reading your fan fiction, I was speechless. Though it has some spelling and/or grammar mistakes, I blurted, "THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST FAN FICTIONS I'VE EVER READ!" Your adjectives and descriptions have made me imagine a mental picture about your story. Your words are carefully chosen, that's why it made me admire the story. I loved it! I just hope you divide your fiction story into chapters instead of a long one-shot. Sometimes it can be painful to the eyes to some people. I just hope you'll divide it. That way, people will be excited for the next chapter. Forgive me for the long review if it has taken your time in reading my review. Truthfully, I can be sometimes lazy to review on a story. But your wonderful story made me think, "Review! It would please the author!"

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Thanks for publishing a story that entertained me. You ARE a great writer. Yup, you are. I'll be waiting for your upcoming stories and if I have time, I'll read your other stories! You and your story greatly impressed me. Keep up the good work! Ü

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From a not-so-ordinary eleven-year-old girl,

Ashira-chan
mythril dust chapter 1 . 12/21/2005
Very interesting and amusing. Especially the part about introducing ramen to the Hyuga household. Naruto calling Hinata's father Mr. H? That's one I'll never forget. Well, Naruto did say that he would try to change the Hyuga when he was Hokage. I guess he has started already. Ramen nights are a big change, that's for sure.

Loved this story.
animefreak-shinobi chapter 1 . 11/9/2005
wow, this was really, really, good. never imagined hiashi in that sense. great writing!
Andrius chapter 1 . 10/6/2005
Oh man That's one of my favorite one-shot stories you wrote. So funny! I see you don't like "filler" episodes much, eh (bizzare dream, LOL).

The diary was pretty interesting, but of course the best part was the ending. Hyuga clan is hooked on ramen! ROFL that's just hilarious :D
Ra-Power chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
Aw, that's cute.
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