Cute story and a rather unique perspective!

I really warmed to Daphne in this piece. Well done :P

Oh, that was absolutely beautiful... I love the content feeling that surrounds Daphne and how happy he is with Osgood. Made my day, really.

I hope the Muses will inspire you to write more!

Dude where'd that come from? It's an interesting and unique approach and I was surprised, since you actually made it believable since in the movie jerry was originally into sugar. I like it though.

Thanks for such a great dtory! I only wish it was a little bit longer... anyway, I enjoyed the poetic part and you described the relationships I really liked...maybe some more?