I've read this story several times and enjoyed it each time. Sorry i haven't left a review before, but hopefully you'll read this and know that I appreciate your sharing your huge talent. I also hope you'll see your way clear to write more stories to post here. I especially hope you finish this particular one. I really like clone Jack stories. I wish there were more of them. I like how you've had them trade bodies so they can see how the other lives. I'm looking forward to your resolution of this situation.

Hi, just read this for the first time and really enjoyed it. Hope you finish it.

Where is the ending? One more chapter you said. C'mon, please?

It's been almost 4 years since you told us there was one more chapter. Have you got it hidden away somewhere? Please find it and post it.

I loved this story for the fantastic and interesting characters, including the OCs, the fast pace and the fact that you obviously took great care in spelling and grammar- care that, as someone who gets way too easily distracted by little errors like that, I certainly appreciated.

The characters were really well done, with actual flaws and depth which is definitely a hard thing to achieve, and the circumstances you put them in were certainly interesting.

Basically, I loved reading, and I personally would love to read more if you were able to post it. Either way though, it was a good read.

reviewing to say that i love this fic and i hope it can be continued :)

you write very well and the oc's are fantastic and realistic

thanks for the good read

rob

PLEASE finish is a great story and I'd like to know how it ends

Finish it. And get the general back into his own body.

I really don't like how you did Jon, he's too... teen-agerish.

"He was going to have to kill a mountain lion"

what an awesome line!

This is a great storyline and you have done a fantastic job of being true to the characters. Please don't stop writing! I can't wait to read the next chapter and I hope you will keep writing. I know you said there was one more chapter to come, but I hope you will expand on Jack and Jon's relationship. And please do what the show didn't and have Jack and Sam finally get together.

I hopethat you complete this story one day soon - it's a joy to read, and I want to know how it ends!

you never updated! :( Good story though.

HI, just wanted to let you know, first saw 1 chapter of this story in and it was wonderful. The characters are well done. I wanted to read more with your great characterizations and interesting situations. Hope you continue w/more than one more chapter. Your stories keep you glued to the pages and you don't want to stop reading.

Thanks, hope you continue.

Oh! so not fair! you left us hanging there! anyway, I think your fic is pretty awesome. I would love to read your next chapter soon! good luck! keep it up!

want more!