Beautiful story. In my humble opinion this is poetry in motion.

The pairing of these two is very well done. And I do feel that I the end where Roxy wrote "Love Roxy" it was her way of saying I love you to Stormer.

Cute. The do make a cute couple even though I like Stormer and Kimber better. _

A really sweet story.

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Really nice take on one of the most interesting combos of the Jem series - Roxy and Stormer. I enjoy all your work anyway - as you know - and you always handle the subject matter with sensitivity and great creative style. I look forward to reading more.

A really poignant, sweet look at a pairing that's never been tackled by a fanfic writer before. Faboo writing as usual!

Great story. I liked how you made it romantic without making it too mushy (not that there's anything wrong with a little mush once in a while). ;-)

You have a great knack for keeping everyone in character no matter what the situation (a rare talent with fan-fic writers). I love the Roxy/Stormer coupling and I hope to see you write more of it.

While a bittersweet story, a totally sweet finish!

Let's *hope* it was a clean shirt, lol.

That was sweet.

Although it still boggles my mind how you pair certain people together I'm not complaining. Hell I have Riot with Jerrica and not with Rio. To each is there own! Your chapter stories are very good! In fact I would love to see you do one with (hehe) Pizzazz and Necko! :)

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That is absolutely stunning. I really don't have any other words for how deeply it moved me. I love this kind of deep immersion in a character so much, and it was so achingly real. Gorgeous characterisation as always, they really are Stormer and Roxy, and the end is perfect.

That was a really powerful story. The way each of them perceives love and relationships and how you've conveyed that without hitting the reader over the head with it is very well-done. I feel those two have a chance at making things work despite all their differences.

A touching and bittersweet story.