Reviews for At the End of the World |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Kiba died yet I smiled. I couldn't help it; this was so well written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man, I've been looking for this fic for ages, only to stumble across it on someone's fav. list. Talk about lucky. Anyway, the reason I was looking for it was because of its unusual, but interesting, plot, and the fact that it was the first Naruto story I ever read. Yeah, that might have to do with it a lot as well. ANyway, just wanted to say awesome story. You did great with your experiment. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This makes sense to me. So, Kiba thinks that Shino is challenging him for the title of Leader of the Pack? Hinata really is better than they think... |
![]() ![]() ![]() o.0 Shino... *Sniffle* Me loves ma shino. I really gotta give you props on this one. It's amazingly well-written and it really grabs the readers attention. And that beggining was beatiful. I expect great things from you. -5 |
![]() ![]() ![]() ~*~*~*~ Hmm...I left wondering if I missed something that should have been obvious. It didnt seem confusing at all to me. Enjoyed it greatly, although I wish you had kept writing it to when the rest of the team gets there, but, heh, I wish you added more chapters to all your stories ive read so far. Great chapter! ~*~ZZ~*~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh... so sad... even if it is sad, it was also very well written. great story. |
![]() ![]() Wow. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good, and that's a killer last line. |
![]() ![]() ![]() beautiful...In every way I can imagine, thios is simply beutiful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() No! *sobs* That is awful...no...why did I read this? I saw the name Shino and I just had to check it out. *sobs harder* No! T_T I just wanted to check out your page... Talk to you later perhaps. And update your other fanfiction asap. (the middle ground) Otherwise I'll stop telling people to read it. (No I won't it's too good to keep quiet about) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, wow. This is just, wow, amazing. It's like, ohmyfreakin'gosh amazing. I love the ending. I love the beginning. I love the middle. But I think I love the ending the most. Shino, right? Amazing. I have nothing more to say. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was so sad. and beautiful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... The poetic feel of it leaves me breathless. And the second person pov is very poignant. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is an amazing oneshot. I loved it. It was really well-written, and the whole premise of it was really neat. The sadness of it hit home, and I love what you had him say at the end. Excellent job, very deep and touching. Kudos, and arigatou for a great read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was… I don't know… a 'something' |