Reviews for The Odd Couples |
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![]() ![]() ![]() "Alright, I've had enough!" Carl shouted. "I can't take this anymore! I'm going to go play with Bolbi!" he said before walking off. He turned back around after he took a few steps. "Tag! I'm going to go play tag with Bolbi!" Dang, can't get any more serious than that. Oh wait, it does. Hahaha. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "But I'll be the first to admit that my invention made a mistake. Ok? We all know that Sheen likes Libby and that I like," he suddenly stopped when he realized what he was about to say. "And I like Betty." Cindy shot him a nasty look. "I mean, I, I, I'm gay," he nervously said. Anything would have been better than that. I could have said I loved Hillary Clinton and that would have been better. "I mean, uh, oh just forget it!" I can't breathe from laughing too hard, this has to be a plan to kill me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "How dare she. I can't believe that she did this to me. She knows that I hate lettuce on my sandwich! This is unbelievable! Carl angrily thought as he took a bite out of his lunch." Bwahahaha. The silliness of everyone else is just slightly too exaggerated, but that got me to laugh. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh hey, what do you know? I already reviewed this, and I completely forgot! This was such a funny fic; I really did enjoy this. :D |
![]() ![]() I snorted a few times as I read this story, and I actually busted up laughing when Jimmy said he was gay! Oh my gosh...this was hilarious! XD |
![]() ![]() in the first few chapters, I was like WHAT? NOOO IT'S ALL WRONG!'( but then, this all happened:) great story. my fab part was: How dare she. I can't believe that she did this to me. She knows that I hate lettuce on my sandwich! This is unbelievable! Carl angrily thought as he took a bite out of his lunch. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just reread this and was like still awesome. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Apparantly I already reviewed this story a very long time ago. But, I just re-found it and though I'd drop in to say that this story is pure epic WIN. Especially chapter 5. That is solidified ROFL if there ever was such a thing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! |
![]() ![]() The summary was so hilarios. lol! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG I loved this story. Jimmy and Libby would make some Sense but Cindy and Sheen would never happen Not in a bilion years. This would be a great episode. It would make everyone laugh. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great great great. You got some really nice stuff here. Really funny, didn't try too hard. (I hate when writers do that.) Fabulous job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Before I read the rest of this...you've got me laughing at loud at parts, clutching my head in a "why, oh why?" manner, and just flat out grinning like a madwoman. This is hysterical. I just wanted to review and say that. Onward! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG!This story is so freakin' funny! I was laughing so hard(and a bit creeped out on the Carl/Bolbi thing, but I guess that's normal)! Haha. Write more like this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE YOUR STORY! IT'S SO FUNNY! MAKE A SEQUEL PLEASE! IT'S THE BEST STORY! |