WONDERFUL I LOVE IT!

WONDERFUL

TAKERU WALKED IN ON U GUYS I WONDER WAT HE WILL SAY

TAI HAS COME TO YOUR RESCUE ONCE AGAIN

BAD TAICHI I CAN'T BELIEVE U JACK RABBIT

DANG THIS IS BAD

DAMN THEY R IN TROUBLE NOW

GUYS HELP HIM PLEASE POOR TAKERU

OH NO

SHOOT

HE WILL BE OK RIGHT

DANG IT MATT U NEED TO FOCUS

POOR MATT

Hello X'D Nice to meet an awesome author like you who make this awesome story. When I said awesome, I really meant it because this story was able to make me push away my homework just so I can eat up the whole story without a pause *w*

But, would you let me to tell you some of my opinions about this story? :) Just ignore them if you don't like my words...

When I read the first chapter, I thought that this story must have a nice plot so I should continue reading. But on my half reading, honestly, I've ever made a decision to stop reading there and search for another chapter. Because (I'm sorry!) I thought with one paragraph that contains so many sentences and yamato's naration that showed the too sudden changes of his feeling from hate to love at only the beginning of the story and a few other reasons... I'm sorry but your first chapter is a bit messy, I can say. But after all, I try to keep going and I never regret my decision for continuing reading *w*

I just love the way you wrote down Tai's character. I can really see a true leader soul inside of him. Although I think Yamato is a bit OOC but I really love how the story's going. How desperate and frustation Yamato and how clueless but brave Taichi who always think of his friends more than anything inclueding himself and love. And I see that start from chapter 2 till the end, you've improved much your writing skill of how you should make one paragraph with less sentence and I love just how descriptive your story is XD

But... I'm a bit disappointed with the epilogue... No offence... The story that Tai wrote a bit ruin everything especially his true-leader character that I've mentioned before. I think the story is already perfect without the mention of Tai's POV of the story. Because what he wrote really made me to think that from the beginning of the story, he actually prefer love and Matt than friendship. I didn't blame Matt who act like that because he's a loner. But for a leader like Tai, I think it's wrong to prefer love than friendship and team. A true knight will never bother of love or at least put love thingy in the second place, because that means he's just thinking of himself and Matt is like that so it's okay. Tai's story made me think that other 5 digidestined children are just 'a force' to put them on the story because there're should be 7 digidestinied (plus Kari later). I know Tai's story is directly for Matt but it just make me change my opinion of the whole story, mostly about Tai's character.

I'm sorry, I know I've no right to critic your plot because I'm just a reader and you are the author. So it's like you're a 'Kami-sama' and I'm just a random human. I hope you don't think my review as a flame because it's not!

I said this because I love your story :) I don't that you will read my review because this story is an old story in your archieve right?

But let me fav and say this XD I love the plot, I love the angst, I love TaiTo and the ending, and I loveTai-kun in this story so much! I mean the true-leader Tai-kun :D

All right then! That's all my long 'speech'. I hope you still writing until now! GANBATTE!

OH MY!
I LOVE THIS.
VERY MUCH.

This story was amazingly mind-blowing. Especially your characterization of both Yamato & Taichi. And I love how you ended it.