That was really interesting. Good job.

WooH! That was cool. And I can really imagine Artemis Fowl dressed as a punk. He would look SO SEXY! He's such a evil, genius punk. Very good in picking the costume. THIS IS SUCH A GOOD STORY! I love Artemis Fowl! It would be so interesting to see his perspective on puberty and what he starts to think. You portrayed him really well, as well. So yeah, in all, a great job and UPDATE SOON! PLEAASE! Pretty please with chocolate syrup, chocolate, ice-cream (all the flavours you like), cookies, lollies of any sort, a heap of other miscellaneous sweet things and a cherry on top! PLEASE!

Oh, please update soon. I love this fic. Arty is PUNK! Ha, I always thought the look would suit him perfectly! Yay! Punk Arty! Awesome.

Phew. My computer finally let me enter this fic and submit a review. *starts cursing in Chinese, English, Japanese, Egyptian, and French* Artemis with a new makeover. Hmm. *smirks* Cool fic! Can't wait for next time. Oh yeah, I like his makeover. It's my style! lol

OMG, my name was in your story! Hehe, thanks for the acknowledgement! Can't wait for some more updates, great chapter, by the way!

O.o I liked the makeover- Artemis with pierced ears? OUCH! (When I got mine pierced I jumped [I was seven at the time and very jumpy ;)] and the thing only went half-in. It really hurt. Lucky Arty not having to go through trying to get it re-done)

Anyway, I was very happy at the quick update. And, on the subject of Artymis, chaos indeed! Not only does she contain quite a bit, she seems to like creating it.

~Cat

I am tired. And I have PeaceFrogs stuckin my head. and I need to get all of my HW done by 1 so that I can go and work the computers again today. But, story is still looking, well I don't know Actualy I think it went just a small bit down hill, I was looking over at the other chapters and it seems to pick up though. anyways see ya. Peace Frogs is an awsome song.

Interesting...

I suppose that you have watched Chrono Crusade by the looks of it...

Im curious to see how this goes, good luck with next chapter :)

Excellent story! Update soon!

whatup? this is all stuff that I have read so far, but still interesting. anyways, you did add in some stuff. and the profile sounded awffly familer. anyways I am tired and should be doing a research paper. see ya.

w00t! I got a shout-out for what I think was the first time in my life! Yay! ANYway, me still likes. Much :).

Now let's give Arty a makeover!

Nice! Write more, I'll spell check!

The story looks great so far, nice touch of suspence to keep us all interested. All in all good writting. keep it up, looks to be a great story.

mogget! i hope you chek your reviews. i don't know how this works. i have already read this, but i just wanted to tell you that i think it is wondeful. two acorns up!

-see you later, tyrant.

work on the dialouge. needs more emotion.

Personally, I liked the twist you put in the Artemis Fowl world, with the demons and all, but there is just a bit of OOC with John Spiro. In The Eternity Code, he is very Americanised, using terms like "Rotten little kid" and not "child". Also, Mr. Spiro would never call Artemis "Master Fowl", he would want to use a degreading term, or somrthing like that. Other than that, everything else i like, including the "demon magic" concept. Looking forward to more chapters.