out of all the stories i have read on fanfic i gotta say these stories top them all - i really enjoyed reading both these stories, u have an amazingly talent in writing. your grammar was good for the most part and even the yu yu chars still held their char personality that they do in the shows. i look forward to more of your work.

Um, can I be ur beta or something? u said u had a bunch of mistakes in chappie 9, so I decided to catch them and write them out for ya' and I'm gonna tell u here. lol. ok:

"as the horrified gasps and mutterings"-that should be 'mutters'

"thier hands, grow"-that should be 'their hands, grew'

"After several seconds, she holds up"- that should be 'held up'

"Our principle of peace and non fighting"- 'Our principles of peace and pacifism'

"out right small debates"- 'small outright debates'

"if any of you would want me to step down"-'if any of you want me to step down'

"which it was a first"- 'which was a first' or 'of which it was a first'

"on it's own with it's own mind"- 'on its own with its own mind'

"her dress tattered and worn, looking like every other Angel, worn down."- 'her dress in frayed tatters, and looking like every other Angel: worn down.'

"even making any impact"- 'even making an impact'

"desicion"- 'decision'

"extremely larger version"- 'extremely large version'

"eyes saddened again as he holds"- 'eyes saddened again as he held'

"take our offering of our powers, lives, and world to seal this evil from the other four worlds!"- 'take our offering of our powers, our lives, and our world to seal this evil away from the other four!'

YOU DON'T HAVE TO EVEN PAY ATTENTION TO THIS IF U DON'T WANNA, AND I LOVE THIS AND THE FIRST ONE SO MUCH U CAN JUST SEND ME CHAPPIE 9 VIA EMAIL, I'LL FIND AND CHANGE THE STUFF FOR U, AND SEND IT BACK, AND U CAN UPLOAD IT IN PLACE OF THE ORIGINAL. LOL, I HAVE A LOT OF TIME ON MY HANDS...

THIS IS FOR CHAPTER NINE

"Even though it was a heavy burden for you to carry, you takes it onto yourself to carry their guilt, feeling that you should have sensed that they would eventually succumb to the desire of power and 'Earthly' enjoyments, whether good or bad, that went against the very natures of the Angels," he says softly." Um, I think that should be "Even...enjoyments, whether good or bad, and that went against the very natures of the Angels..."

"you to carry, you takes it onto yourself to carry their guilt" you takes? lol

O.O wow. I really should stop hoping for happy ending in this sequel shouldn't I? u kno, u said u don't think this is very popular? I think u should've gotten it all written out and posted the entire completed thing at the same time, so ppl wouldn't leave, hating u for hurting everyone, but knowing there is in truth a happy ending...um, I haven't skipped ahead so...there IS a happy ending...right?

~blows into a kleenex~ hiei IS coming back right? RIGHT? *mad, crazy gleam in my eyes* HE HAS TO COME BACK! HE HAS TO! ~collapses sobbing into a dark, dark little corner~

Wow, that was...beautiful! That ending! I could practically hear the suspensful, dread-filled music behind it! That was like the Barbie doll of rising action; perfect. lol, seriously, it took suspense and went up and up and the music got louder and louder and faster and faster and...DUDE! frickin awesome...

FOR THE LOVE OF GOD! MY REVIEW WAS CUT OFF AGAIN!

I love the story. That is all.

~Spirit

And now I'v read your sequel!

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It just keeps getting better and better!

~HiddenSunsets~

Poor Angela. I hope she finds her husband soon.

~HiddenSunsets~

Don't worry Kurama! You'll see Botan-chan again!

~HiddenSunsets~

So much drama but that just makes it even more addicting!

Ooh! Keep me in suspense, will you? That's ok cause I love this story! I'm gonna review each and every chapter!

~HiddenSunsets~

AHH! ANGELA! WAKE UP!

~HiddenSunsets~