mistake here the R.A.B. is Regulus Arcturus Black not Alphard

Hermione is a special kind of bitch, writting letters to the Death Eater who poisioned Ron. Makes Lavender look like an angel.

I 3 this book i wish you will write more

Well J.K Rowling should of gave you guys credit

Well this is a few years after the last review on this chapter but hey ... i didnt think it was ginny and luna ... i did think it was gran longbottom though ... anyways good story :D

This was really good, loved Fred and George's potion. I laughed like mad!

Good story so far, although Regulus Black's middle name in the real books is arcturus! Keep up the good work

I'm just finishing chapter 3 and ya have me hooked. It's real. Not to mushy, not too overprotective, but it shows the truth, and has more viewpoints. I like what I see.

i'm a reader of many harry potter fanfiction stories ( .uk, , and ) this story is very well made. i liked the epilogue with rita. i give you a 10/10 for originallity, 9/10 for action, 10/10 for overall work. i really liked it, and i hope to read more of your work.

I just have to point out something. In the first chapter Ginny was going on about being helpful rather than a liability but she's only 15 years old. Now I over looked that assuming that you were going to mention something about the ministry being to preoccupied to bother with something as small as underage magic, I was wrong. After entering the Dursley's house it was made somewhat an issue. Being underage, Harry was unable to perform magic and even for some unknown reason mentions this to his relatives, but when Vernon goes to attack Harry Ginny is flying off with a bat bogey hex. I just think it's a bit silly, no matter how many text books she's memorized, she's over a year away from being of age and therefore a liability.

Of course, leave us with a cliff hanger will you? Have you written a story about that yet, or are you not planning to? I thoroughly enjoyed this story. (I laughed my A** off over several parts).

Cosmyk

Snape stretched, YAY! Sorry, but I'm a huge Alan Rickman fan. My favorite movie with him in it (other than the Harry Potter movies) is Sense and Sensibility! He was soooo H-O-T HOT!

Can't wait to read more.

Cosmyk

this is for the entire story: AWESOME, AMAZING, I wish Rowling would have put alot of this story into her own. this story was... too cool for words. thanks for making it. once again AWESOME.

Wow I am amazed that the two of you have been so accurate with things that we find out in DH so far. The Erumpet? Amazing! Kudos to you. PS I am absolutely loving this story so far, and I realize that at this point it is already long complete, but just wanted to let you know that I will probably stay up way too late finishing it tonight... Thank you!

Hm...I'm unsure about continuing with this story. Ginny said, "I’d be an asset, not a liability." How can that be? She's underage and cannot perform magic without the ministry discovering it. That's a big point against her traveling with them. Also, why didn't Hermione say anything? She's supposed to be smart and logical, but she didn't utter a single word. Only Ron spoke, but nobody backed him up. Harry's one argument was weak and not very convincing. I've read several stories post HBP and some have Ginny with the trio while others didn't. Each of those stories supported strong arguments and explanations for and against her traveling along. Your summary said that the first couple of chapters weren't that great, yet the first chapter must be good enough to lure in the reader. I'm not impressed with the weak (or lack of) excuse to include Ginny. She wants revenge? Another thing, why didn't they apparate to their destination? Even if the event occurred before Harry's 17th birthday, both Hermione and/or Ron could travel with him using side-along apparation.