It was a cute short story.

Haha. Lol. That was fun to read in less thab a minute.

Too bad it's very short :p Did you have a longer version ?

Thanks anyway ;)

It's so devious I love it

I know it only a hundred words or so but still it was fun to read i think you should do a full story one day base off this.

You do realise that the colonials have the inferior technology right?

Oh! And that's what happens when you dare the universe to prove you wrong.

Actually this is a perfect beginning of a story. Why don't you make it into a long story? It sound good. Keep going!

Actually this is a perfect beginning of a story. Why don't you make it into a long story? It sound good. Keep going!

so this is a good start. you could expand it into a larger story i think someday. that being said this is a good oportunity to make a larger tale about a first encounter between the colonial remnant fleet and the people of the stargate earth.

Short, but funny.

LOL! O The Irony!

hee hee, wonderful silliness.

That would be great if a crossover was made from that. Is was almost inspiring. .

Short, silly but i like it.

.sweet.

I agree with the other reviewer, too bad the 2 shows did not meet. You certainly have a perchent for scifi shows. I encourge you to write more on the crossovers...maybe do a SM and stargate x-over?