Amazing story but I need more please!

Cute well done

I read every thing and you still havent wrote anything... WE ALL NEED YOUUU

I READ ALL YOUR CHAPTERS IN TWO DAYS! this fanfiction is AMAZING!
Ple-e-e-e-ease get it done by XMAS! I AM BEGGING U!
Seriously, you are the best fanfic writer ive ever seen. I wrote one as well, and it is really bad trust me. It is one of those "Sailor Earth" ones. You R the B-E-S-T writer!

- Anonymous SM fan

Tell darien what yhe nasty doctor did to you serena

Upate please

I honestly dont think it Was a bad enough comment but apparently it is.. I want to see the apology and where is serenas family? How about Andrew Gives serena some insight on dariens mind? It is only fair that she understands a little bit of how he is! Can wait Till your next update

Modt of your writing is great. Good grammar and spelling which is rare in fanfics. However ch 13 seems rushed, there are a lot of dpelling and gramnar mistskes.

Just a question, does darien ever dress serena before taking her to the hospital? She only had 2 towels in the bathroom

at that moment I would really hate that job too lol I mean great i get to help people but vomit on me and then I'm going to be vomiting too sadly i don't have a very strong stomach

i hope you continue this story.

Serena loves Darien much as rini

Please finish! I am going to die!

I wish you had continued. This story is funny. I love it.

NiiNii-sama

its a great story pls finish