Oof welp there goes Craig he knew that this was gonna happen and that he couldn't hide from the prince of the underworld for long it sure didn't take long for the prince to find that fellow demon of his. Moral of the story : don't mess with the prince of the underworld.

That was incredible, wonderfully written, thank you for writing this! I'm a big Beelzebub fan and them with Michael is very beautiful to picture.

NICE!

Oh, wow! *purr* I've read all of your Good Omens fic, and you are such an awesome writer! I love the conflict and uncertainty presented by the angel/devil relationship, and your take on the beauracracy of Above and Below (I especially appreciate the scenes between the unnamed God and Lucifer). Snicker! "Falling is so outdated..." I think you said at one point, or something like it. I also adore the idea of wings being an erogenous zone, and the trust involved in grooming them. Seeing Crowley and Aziraphale's relationship develop was awesome (and Aziraphale's cool new powers kick butt). The Craig plots were nicely done, and very entertaining while providing character development. H/C certainly seems to be your forte! Seeing Beelzebub and Michael, of all people, develop a relationship...! Wow. Intriguing, and well-written, and plausible the way you've written it. Their characters are so completely different from Aziraphale and Crowley, but I still want to glomp the both of them. It's nice to see the higher-ups in heaven, and get that perspective on things. (I'm readng Guns of August, and am strongly reminded of WWI leadership. But maybe I haven't read enough about government in general, and the government is like that no matter when it is.) "Think of it as a bonus." Hehe! I like how Heaven is more communicative in general, even though demons have that crazy mind-share thing they do. I'm not sure which relationship I appreciate more-Zira and Crowley's, which was a slow courtship over six millenia, or Beel and Michael's, which is less soppy but no less intense, and which has the added thrill of discovery and uncertainty; as well, Beel and Michael's strength of character as commanding officers is appealing, and they present a whole new area for comic opportunities (Beel's hissy fits are pretty grin-worthy, even though I know he's probably intimidating in person). You're very good at getting the whole picture across, presenting the grand scheme of the 'war' while focusing on the personal problems of two of the main characters. I think my favorites are 'Mimicry' and 'What's in a Name' because they have the most plot/suspense, and 'An Angel and a Demon Walk into a Bar' because the characterization here is just too good!

Great read! Thanks for writing and posting!

Yet another fav... you're too good for your own good

Beel and michael, I never thought about them this way, but... I like it And the idea of putting poor Beelzebub into St Peters Basilica is great!

Good work!

What will happen to Craig? Oh, by the way; the demon that helped Crowley and Zira find that James-dude, did he get his powers back or is he still a human? Help me please to find the answers on these questions!