Wow, that ensuing absolutely slayed me. I can't. I'm done. That was awful and great and I just can't.

Wow.

WAAA KAIDOH! T_T

Wow... I can't believe I cried over this. XD Anyway, this is amazing. Good job. :D

...

TTTT/

My God, if there ever was a time for Snickers, Milky Ways, and Tootsie Rolls to all come together and form into a awesome combination of chocolate, it would be now.

I need it.

TTTT/

That was so depressing.

And so heartbreaking.

I should hate you, but I love you.

xD/

This was amazing!

So damn... Ahg.

Words have left me, and I'm sniffling like crazy, trying to get some kind of composure back.

TTTT.

LOVE THIS.

XDD

I'm totally crying right now! That's so sad! You killed off my favorite character! I like this story. I'm so sad!

Okey... I cry. I didn't think I would, but I cry now. Because of Lucky...

Well written, very emotionall.

Baka Mamushi, but he would something like that because of puppy.

And well written Shinji's part. I love his mumble.

YOU CAN"T DO THIS TO ME!

Killing Kaidoh...

NO!

I'm crying here right along side Momo.

Death bed confessions and long build up...

This felt real.

Well written. The story is really good.

OMG, this made me cry. Very well written, and very sad. I can just see Kadioh doing something like that, risking his life for a dog. Him dying, and Momo's reaction, was beautifully sad. Well done!

Oh my god ! I loved your story. Kaido and Momo are like my favorite characters in the whole story, besides tezuka, but that is beside the point. So lovely! Don't beat yourself up! Haha, if you knew me you would laugh. I do the same thing, I hate my writing too. I want to get a fanfiction account, but haven't yet. Write more. In fact, I want to know how you came up with the idea for this story, so please tell me.

GREATO! i cried. so sad! so BEAUTIFUL! SO SAD! :'( :'( *bawling*

T_T D: ;_; I'm practically crying all over now. KAIDOU~! T_T Oh, wait. He's not 'really' dead in the real series...

Your writing made me partially confused! Except for the bit OOCness on the MM and KK, it was really good.

Yeah... that made me cry. It was good though, but damn ;_;

*sniffle*

Your evil story made me cry.

Very well written, I really got emotionally involved in the story.

gosh , i cried reading this . . . xD

momokai rawkes(:

ohyeahs ,

i'm just too lazy ta sign in to

*Cries* So sad and yet so beautiful.