Neat!

OMG! *starts swinging hands in the air*
MAKEANOTHERPLEASEORIWILLEXPLODEINTOMINILITTLEPICESTHATWOULDEXPLODEINTOEVENLITTLERPEICES!

KYAAAAAAAAAAH! D

...Iluvit.

Love it.

Lurve lurve lurve! Luuuuurve it.

Nya.

Just thought I'd tell ya.

~Taruya-chan

& ~Em.

Stunning sensory description, beautifully written, in incredible detail... Wonderful. I adored it. The image of Zim, lost in a feral hunting state, running through the woods under the glow of the full moon... it's beautiful.

Oh...I really like this. I never really thought about how Irkens probably had hunted way-back-whenever.

It kinda makes me want to write my own little fic about Zim hunting.

Definite favorite, loved the ending!

Wow! I think this is one of the best IZ one-shots I've read. It's such an original idea! I really love the line: “You weren’t supposed to let me catch you”. Fantastic story! Adding to my favorites list, for sure!

That was cool. Neat idea. You really captured the thrill of the hunt.

that was...intense. i liked it a lot :)

Ohh that was SUCH a cool one shot one of THE best i've read. Zim would be proud.

Wow, I never would have thought of Zim as being a carnivore before. Interesting fic.

that was cool

Nice job on this! I've always been fascinated with the primal vs. Pak instincts that must be warring inside the Irkens with the introduction of technology to their brains, so this fic was just perfect for me :)

I had always viewed the Irkens as being insect-ish, so it was *really* neat to see a different standpoint focusing on the possibility that they are (were) mammal- or reptile-like. Although you never said it in words in the fic, that was the feeling I got: pack hunters, flesh eaters, almost wolf-like in their mannerisms. Very original! Reminded me a little bit of the velociraptors from Jurrasic Park.

I think you did an excellent job, too, of Dib's reaction to Zim. It wasn't too long, just short enough for Dib to get uneasy and then *snap* things returned back to normal. Above all else, my favorite line had to be:

"You weren't supposed to stop...You weren't supposed to let me catch you."

If anything in the way of a suggestion, I would have liked to see more of Dib's primal side emerge. What would *his* instincts prompt him to do if he became frightened enough?

Overall, fantastic. Definitely going on my favorites, this one is :)

all I can say is wow. that was really good. I liked it a lot.

Nice! It was pretty cool. Stupid Dib had to stop it! He ruined all the fun. hehe oh well. It was really good. Kudos to you!

Invader_Maz out

This is neat. Whatever Zim's species actually is, it evolved from an earlier, more primitive version of its present day self which lived in packs, chased down its prey and ate meat; the pak is a recent addition.

It reminds me that even today we humans are often said to still behave in some of the same ways we did when we lived in caves.

Thanks for not having Zim kill Dib even after catching up to him... even if it was only because Dib himself stopped running!